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Unchartered Course

the heart a quickening on the rise
exhilarated at the ascension
my senses heightened by the exquisite 
	celestial journey
unfettered and with absolute freedom
elated by the emancipation and release
of all senses, serenely self-possessed  
	confident odyssey
soaring above and beyond the rest
without limitation of man 
defying those who would deny me
	unparalleled peaceful passage
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Etheridge Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 10:36 PM
What an incredible mind journey. Love the ending. You should teach meditation.
Fowler Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 5:27 AM
Hi Cooper. Thank you. You are too kind with your words :)
Poet Avatar
July 26, 2022 at 6:41 PM
Hi Linda, and congratulations on your winning contest placement, you penned such a superb poem. Thanks for your comment on my page.
Fowler Avatar
July 27, 2022 at 5:27 AM
I thank you for the visit an congratulations! I appreciate your kind comments. Linda
Watts Avatar
July 26, 2022 at 5:34 PM
Hi Linda Well done snd congrats on your win too Yes once the plane lifts off we are on the lap of the God’s so to speak I have a little ritual I do whenever I fly The second the wheels lift off I turn to the person next to me and say to them “To late now” and then just sit back and enjoy the ride. I enjoyed your descriptive word use in your verse Cheers Christine
Fowler Avatar
July 27, 2022 at 5:26 AM
Many thanks Christine. Yes, it is easier to sit back once past a certain point! :) Linda
Goldsmith Avatar
July 26, 2022 at 10:41 AM
Back with "Congratulations" on your win. A creative write. Have a blessed day writing away...............
Fowler Avatar
July 26, 2022 at 3:35 PM
Many thanks Paula my friend! Linda
Krutsinger Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 11:59 PM
This has an incredible build up "elated by the emancipation and release of all senses, serenely self-possessed confident odyssey" and it never lets the reader down. I felt like I was flying.
Fowler Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 8:37 AM
Oh so happy to hear you say so Caren. It was my. intent to take the reader on a flight with me. Do you think we'll get frequent flyer miles? ;) Linda
Goldsmith Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 11:51 AM
Your "Unchartered Course" is a wonderful write. Have a great/blessed day.............
Fowler Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 12:51 PM
Hello Paula. Thank you for the wonderful read and comment. hugs, Linda
Buhagiar Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 3:46 AM
An enjoyable poem that is meant to increase our bliss.
Fowler Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 7:11 AM
Hi Victor. So glad for your visit and insightful comment! Linda
Pandit Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 6:40 AM
Superbly done, Linda. Enjoyed the tenor, confident voice of your poem.
Fowler Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 7:10 AM
Hello Vijay. Your visits always make my day :) Linda
Anaya Avatar
July 1, 2022 at 6:37 PM
Linda, what a great title for your poem, what shall we find, and in what state of mind...you said it beautifully; Your senses heightened by this celestial journey! Good luck!
Fowler Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 7:09 AM
Hi Anaya. I appreciate the positive comments! Linda
Buehler Avatar
July 1, 2022 at 12:12 PM
It was nice to read such an exhilarating poem, Linda. I was able to feel the thrill! :D
Fowler Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 7:09 AM
Thank you Evelyn. I'm glad you felt it! Linda
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