Alexis Y. Poet Free verse

Uncertainties-Bite Size Poetry

I swam in a river of uncertainties,
as Mr moon gave me his back.
Somber dreams caress my skin,
the light within my eyes is dark.
On my last trip to the milky way,
I was sad, because it had melted.




2-20-19
Resubmitted:5/28/2021
Contest: Bite Size Poetry
Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Robert Lindley February 25, 2019 at 7:31 AM Congratulations dear friend on having your wonderful truly honored s POTD! A fav..

Gershon Wolf February 24, 2019 at 10:54 AM So, my friend, NOW are you going to enter this terrific poem in the contest. Once again: Entre vous...! :) gw Alexis Y. February 24, 2019 at 11:59 AM Hi Gershon, What contest? The contest is judged and over. I'm glad you like the poem my friend. I'm glad stopped by and have a fantastic day:-) Alexis

Susan Ashley February 23, 2019 at 10:41 PM Uncertainties are poignantly reflected in the emotional richness and beauty of your imagery, Alexis. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan

Jack Webster February 23, 2019 at 9:31 PM Love the image of swimming through the moon and the milky way. I'm really surprised it didn't place. Glad it got POTD

Andrea Dietrich February 23, 2019 at 12:38 PM Alexis, this is so deserving of POTD and it's so unfortunate that Nina had only ten winners because THIS , my dear, deserved a win!!

Laura Leiser February 23, 2019 at 11:25 AM Beautiful imagery and emotion from your poignant poem, Alexis! I see it made POTD! Congrats to you! :)

Vladislav Raven February 23, 2019 at 8:24 AM Hi Alexis, dropping back with my congratulations on your well-deserved Poem Of The Day with this wonderful piece. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Kim Rodrigues February 23, 2019 at 6:50 AM The reflection of uncertainties...nicely done. Congrats on POTD!

Tania Kitchin February 23, 2019 at 5:30 AM Alexis, awesome imagery! Congratulations on POTD!

Brandy Nicole February 22, 2019 at 11:18 PM Congratulations Alexis, on Poem of the Day. Your thoughts hold many emotions indeed. ~ Brandy

Nick Trim February 22, 2019 at 9:59 PM congrats on potd :)

Eve Roper February 22, 2019 at 5:48 PM Nicely done, Alexis, you painted a perfect picture. Congratulations on POTD and good luck in the contest.

John Gondolf February 22, 2019 at 4:11 PM Life is full of uncertainties, Alexis, we all have them. Nicely penned verse my friend. Congrats on POTD. John

Connie Marcum Wong February 22, 2019 at 2:10 PM Alexis, Congratulations on having this fun poem honored with POTD! : ) xxoo

Sunlite Wanter February 22, 2019 at 9:32 AM Congratulations to you for a mystical feeling poem.

Okonkwo Ifeanyichukwu February 22, 2019 at 9:02 AM Strategically straight and decoratively simple and meaningful poem, Congratulations Alexis. Alexis Y. February 22, 2019 at 9:05 AM Hi Okonkwo, I appreciate that you stopped by to congratulate me:-) Alexis

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart February 22, 2019 at 8:32 AM Very cool, ethereal feel, gem of a poem Alexis, congratulations on POTD! :) xomo! Alexis Y. February 22, 2019 at 8:35 AM Hi Maureen, Thanks for stopping by to congratulate and for wishing me luck in the contest:-) Alexis Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart February 22, 2019 at 8:32 AM & good luck in the contest!

Winged Warrior February 22, 2019 at 8:10 AM Excellent entry! Alexis...and Congrats!!! on POTD!!...love & light...^WW^...{*J*} Alexis Y. February 22, 2019 at 8:36 AM Hi WW, Thanks for stopping by to congratulate me. Love and light right back at ya:-) Alexis

Joseph May February 22, 2019 at 7:47 AM An emotive write..Congrats on POTD Alexis.. Alexis Y. February 22, 2019 at 8:38 AM Hi Joseph, Thanks for stopping by to congratulate me:-) Alexis

Jan Allison February 22, 2019 at 7:41 AM dropping back with my congrats on your POTD:-) hugs Jan xx Alexis Y. February 22, 2019 at 8:38 AM Hi Jan, I appreciate you coming back to congratulate me:-) Alexis

John Lawless February 22, 2019 at 7:15 AM ...so lick you fingers and thank the Milky Way for sharing.....very intriguing metaphor for the topic of this contest Alexis Y. February 22, 2019 at 8:41 AM Hi John, Thank you very much for leaving such a comment:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit February 22, 2019 at 7:09 AM Congrats Alexis on poem of the day..splendidly done. Alexis Y. February 22, 2019 at 8:44 AM Hi Vijay, I appreciate you stopping by to congratulate me:-) Alexis

Heidi Sands February 22, 2019 at 6:00 AM Congratulations for POTD with this great poem :) Alexis Y. February 22, 2019 at 8:45 AM Hi Heidi, I appreciate you stopping by to congratulate me:-) Alexis

Bobby May February 22, 2019 at 5:19 AM What a wonderful poem my friend great Job Alexis!! Back to say Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d Alexis Y. February 22, 2019 at 8:47 AM Hi Bobby, Thank you very much my friend. I wasn't expecting this at all. However I appreciate the honor. I appreciate you stopping by to congratulate me:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen February 22, 2019 at 5:11 AM - Great, Alexis ... congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Alexis Y. February 22, 2019 at 8:49 AM Hi Anne-Lise, I appreciate you stopping by to congratulate me:-) Alexis

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