Unbuttoned

As he unbuttoned her blouse
he soon  became aroused
She unbuttoned his shirt
and took off her skirt
He didn't know about her spouse

Then the doorbell rang
It was her husband Stan
He buttoned up his shirt
She pulled up her skirt
he  went out the window and away he ran

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Date: 2/20/2013 9:50:00 PM
Ha! I loved it. Nice Job
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Date: 1/31/2013 12:13:00 PM
Got a chuckle about this one..Great one for the button contest..I think it will be in top of the winners' list..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara
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Date: 1/29/2013 2:56:00 PM
Ha, ha, might this be from experience, I wonder?
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Date: 1/29/2013 4:54:00 PM
no Robert....has it happened to you?....lol
Date: 1/29/2013 2:31:00 PM
Joseph a light limerick with fun attached. Flowed well. warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 1/29/2013 3:56:00 AM
Wow nearly caught,, good job ground floor...like this Joseph, different, good luck in contest...
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Date: 1/28/2013 11:21:00 PM
funny and bold too...enjoyed reading...
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Date: 1/27/2013 6:49:00 PM
Hilarious...I don't do well with Limericks, though they can be a lot of fun! I just don't have the patience, I think. I bet you had fun writing this one, Joseph. Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/27/2013 4:51:00 PM
cute and funny. ME LIKES.
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Date: 1/27/2013 12:22:00 PM
Good one, Joseph..... :) & :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/27/2013 11:12:00 AM
Lol. Funny write
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