'unbroken Rhapsody'

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I like- when music and nature b l e n d in an unbroken rhapsody with waves c r a s h i n g in my mind and graceful notes of a piano drifting in the LUSH forest oh the t w i t t e r i n g c h i r p i n g of birds mingling with a gentle flute . . . the gentle whisper of the wind entangled with violins that q u i v e r and I am floating in the throbbing overture of MUSIC and n a t u r e ______________________ October 19, 2016 Poetry/Free Verse/'Unbroken Rhapsody' Copyright Protected, ID 16-1020-532-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym.

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John Lawless

Date: 5/8/2018 8:03:00 AM

Beautifully written BW..there is nature in music.....and music in nature...so when they combine.....Viola!!!!

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/8/2018 7:37:00 AM

Oh I love this BW! I love the piano and nature. and piano with the violin. This is a favorite for me :) Well done!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/8/2018 7:33:00 AM

I like the words you have used, and the fact that you sound like an old-soul, and a poet, and a musician. it comes across clearly in this poem, that you have probably studied Coleridge, my favorite poet, and others of the romantic era. I am highly impressed. This is amazing to me. I have written down 9 words from your poem that I am going to try and use someday. Love to you and love this poem!