Unbridled Spring

unbridled Spring galloping greenery — hidden houses 7/28/2018

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Maurice Rigoler

Date: 7/31/2018 1:49:00 PM

My poem "Thirteen' is based on real observations of young people. Not all of them, of course, are like the girl in the poem, but a great many are. Glad you enjoyed it. / M

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/31/2018 8:23:00 PM

I did, Maurice!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/29/2018 2:40:00 PM

My backyard has unbridled and galloping bushes and thorns that need trimming, great verse!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/31/2018 8:22:00 PM

Thank you, Michelle!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/29/2018 12:05:00 PM

love it Kim! the weeds are going to have a field day after the deluge of rain we have had after such a lengthy dry spell!:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/29/2018 12:09:00 PM

Same here, Jan! But I am loving the droughtless Spring! Was scary for a while. Thanks, my friend!