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UNBREAKABLE Eyelids shut tight in a patent leather box fraught with diamonds. 6/13/2017 Monoku Form

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Date: 6/15/2017 7:38:00 AM
Both an original and creative monoku, Kim! Now, let me try shutting my eyes tight....:) Regards // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/15/2017 9:37:00 AM
Thanks, Paul!
Date: 6/14/2017 12:55:00 PM
Cool imaginings this poem be, Kim. Like ice, baby. Lol! Superb monoku. Love always.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2017 2:55:00 PM
Thanks so much, Freddie! :)
Date: 6/14/2017 7:06:00 AM
Very creative Kim. I can see this with my eyes closed.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2017 7:12:00 AM
Thanks, Chris!

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