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Unborn

Earth's womb is full, it's Time to give birth to encased Bodies, womb groans weight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/18/2009 3:18:00 PM
A kool Haiku that captures us all>>James
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Date: 9/18/2009 11:31:00 AM
Earth give birth, hey I made a rhyme...what would Earth give birth to I wonder...whatever it is t should be called Earth Jr.
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Date: 9/18/2009 10:16:00 AM
this is well written Sara it can be interpreted in many different ways the mark of a good write.......
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Date: 9/18/2009 6:37:00 AM
Excellent haiku, Sara! Great description that can be taken on at least two levels -- a mother giving birth and the Earth suffering from overpopulation as it "groans weight." Love, carolyn
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