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Unbearable Paul

There once was a snowman named Paul Quite sadly he had a great fall When he landed on his head They thought for sure he was dead Paul Bearers they started to call Rich the Ball Bearer There once was a snow man named Rich He wore no clothing not a stitch His snow balls were big and round yet they were not easily found Can you help poor rich scratch his itch? Note: No snow men or women were harmed in the writing of these poems. Mind you it is possible that balls might have been scratched. December 30th, 2017 For Eve Roper’s Upside Down World Contest

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/28/2018 4:54:00 PM

Hi Richard, these are two excellent limericks, fall off the chair laughing, yes, I did, well the side of the bed really. No telling anyone! These have to go into my faves, I am still laughing as I write my comment. Loved them. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike.

Jack Horne

Date: 2/18/2018 1:02:00 PM

LOL, love these

Ralph Sergi

Date: 1/24/2018 2:18:00 PM

Two ingenious poems, Richard. I will say bawd but not bawdy.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 1/24/2018 2:18:00 PM

Two ingenious poems, Richard. I will say bawd but not bawdy.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/13/2018 8:05:00 PM

I'm still giggling at paul bearers Rick lol. Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/16/2018 9:01:00 AM

Thanks Jan. Hugs back.

Roy Pett

Date: 1/7/2018 10:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win with your very clever and funny limerick Richard. :))

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/7/2018 10:21:00 AM

Thanks Roy.

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/6/2018 3:42:00 PM

Still funny. Back for congrats, Richard.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/6/2018 4:14:00 PM

Thanks line!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/6/2018 2:30:00 PM

Oh Richard....very funny. I see you did well with this one. Congrats!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/6/2018 2:39:00 PM

Thanks Eileen, welcome back.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 1/6/2018 9:50:00 AM

Ha Ha Rich: I’ll never look at a snowman the same again. Your limericks gave me a good chuckle today. I see you won. Congrats. SuZ

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/6/2018 2:40:00 PM

Thanks SuZ, your comment brought a smile.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/6/2018 9:47:00 AM

Excellent humour Richard:) Congratulations on a very deserved top win! Regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/6/2018 2:40:00 PM

Thanks Paul.;0)

Viv Wigley

Date: 1/6/2018 12:45:00 AM

I knew this would do well, Richard, deservedly so. Congrats! Regards, Viv

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/6/2018 2:40:00 PM

Thanks for the visit Viv.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 1/5/2018 10:52:00 PM

Big Congrats Richard to win top. Happy New Year.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/6/2018 2:40:00 PM

Thanks Anisha.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2018 9:11:00 PM

this was such great fun, Richard. Big congrats on your well deserved win.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/6/2018 2:41:00 PM

Thanks for dropping back.

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/5/2018 9:00:00 PM

Lol! Rick, I enjoyed the humor in both limericks. Congrats on your winning write:-) Alexis

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/6/2018 2:41:00 PM

Thanks Alexis.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/5/2018 7:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Richard, wonderful limerick. :) Hugs Eve ~`*

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/6/2018 2:42:00 PM

Thanks for choosing my limerick Eve.

Silent One

Date: 1/3/2018 1:29:00 PM

Nice to see your humorous side lol

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/4/2018 8:54:00 AM

Thanks Silent.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 1/1/2018 1:08:00 PM

Great fun to read. The last is such a joyous play on words. Nicely done, best of luck in the contest, and Happy New Year.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/1/2018 1:22:00 PM

Thanks Scott, this was a fun one to write.

John Fleming

Date: 1/1/2018 3:14:00 AM

Reminds me of Humpty Dumpty. Lol! Cleverly penned, Richard. All the best for your New Year...may it be a happy and fulfilling one. Best regards! :) john

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/1/2018 9:10:00 AM

Thanks John, I appreciate your visit.