Unbearable Beauty In the Colour Red

red is such an interesting colour
war is such an intricate gore
but it's SO SIMPLE
YES
I'VE FOUND MY WAY OUT 
BLEND THE SINS
AND CREATE A WHIRLWIND
OF DEPRESSION AND LOSS AND DARK THOUGHTS
AND MANY SUICIDAL ATTEMPTS MADE UP IN YOUR HEADLESS
CHOKING AND PILLS AND GUILT AND UGLINESS
LAMENT AND WEEPING AND AND AND SADNESS
SADNESS
SADNESS
Sadness
yes
draw some more art on your paper veins, dear
you beautiful PSYCHO YOU
YES YES
ONLY EXCELLING IN ONE COLOUR
maybe someone might see 
and gift you the help you need
but i don't believe white walls
will stop you from seeing blood
flesh is such SUCH an EROTIC word
how the final syllable quiets it's victim
light the torture
and that's all the light you've got left
to write in


you put the art in artery
painting from your colours is so soothing
it’s like making a wish in the fountain of youth
it’s never fun to wipe away the evidence
but most of it squirts onto the canvas
oh, yes.
what a perfect mess i’ve made of you.


Red on white is a sad colour and he's gone
his body floods onto the Earth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lamoureux Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 7:12 PM
Congrats on winning in Franks contest. Frank is a hard but fair judge. For me i feel this is one of your best. Within this piece I see a glimpse of your possibilities. It's edgy but minus the abruptness of some of your other pieces. It doesn't put off the reader, therefore they become engaged and are able to look beyond the surface of the writing. Bravo.
Aiane Avatar
November 22, 2016 at 2:42 PM
this is a combination of all my writing's regarding the colour red, actually. fun fact.
Roberts Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 9:41 PM
wow, very dramatic piece worthy of its win, congrats
George   Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 1:15 PM
SENSATIONAL!!! truly. many congrats on your top-notch win.
La France Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 10:29 AM
AA congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write ~
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