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Unbearable Beauty In Black

Bells summoned as they tolled the sad departure
Of my poor mother’s sudden demise.
I led the short funeral procession
Towards her eternal resting sepulchre.

Before her black ebony casket was closed,
I looked intently down at her, still beautiful.
Her dress, her favourite, all lace in black.
That was her last and final wish.

They laid her in a damp black tomb
Surrounded by tall dark cypress trees,
A breeze sighed and soughed softly in sorrow
While I stood head bowed down in grief. 
 
Lifeless leaves fell in yellow-red bunches
And covered up her ghostly grave
No tears streamed down my face, heartbroken,
Strewed instead black roses, fragrant and sweet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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June 28, 2021 at 9:15 PM
Such a sad and somber piece recounting the last farewell to your dear mother. Beautifully written with lovely description. My condolences in your loss my friend. Time will lessen the pain but never the memories. God Bless, JB
Kiser Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 8:10 PM
Beautiful sadness penned here; a moving write.
Dietrich Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 1:11 PM
Beautifully sad one, Victor. It's not true, is it? I saw a movie once called Black Rose but I think it's not a real color, so would be a symbol in your poem (5 comments down. 25 or more to go!!!)
Andresen Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 11:21 AM
- One last wish ... but, deeply missed - A sensitive poem ... beautifully written as a memory of this sad day, Victor - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Logan Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 10:03 AM
Forlorn words expressing equally sorrowful thoughts. Emotions on full display in your tender lines, Victor.
Edmonds  Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 8:54 AM
A sad, yet beautiful poem in honour of your mother Victor. Bless you, Belle
Kitchin Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 4:45 AM
Victor, a beautifully expressed sad poem,
Roper Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 8:42 PM
Blessings..
Buehler Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 12:24 PM
Victor, you have described the saddest day eloquently, in this moving verse tinged with beauty. This is a Fave.
Rose  Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 10:56 AM
How sad, you must remember that moment like yesterday, all powerful moments normally are, they stay engraved in our mind forever.
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June 26, 2021 at 5:33 AM
Fave for me. My mom’s sweet form is ashes now…so strange. Sometimes the sadness of a dirge or a poem of remembrance and mourning we need. We need to feel our sadness because we loved that much.
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June 26, 2021 at 11:53 AM
One day she'll be sweet again. Who knows? We might meet at the end of time. Hugs.
Pandit Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 5:22 AM
Poignant words serenade a loved one. never easy to say goodbyes, but, memories live on. Wonderfully emotive write, Victor.
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June 26, 2021 at 4:52 AM
warm and genuine hugs from the heart Victor, you have expressed in a touching and lyrical way the saddest and most desperate times a person can go through. The loss of the one who brought us into this world, and then raised us with love and life. Blessings and best regards
Seeker Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 3:40 AM
Sadness, so eloquently penned
Daniel Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 2:56 AM
That's sad, Victor, losing your parent is really hard, you have captured all the emotions here..my heartfelt condolences...
Cunningham Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 2:54 AM
Even in death if we look beyond the grief there is beauty. Tom
Skelly Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 1:23 AM
Dear Victor, you have captured the somber mood that pervades a funeral. The last line: Strewed instead black roses, fragrant and sweet...A nice touch....Delice
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