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Unaware

Eyes closed, We stand with outstretched arms. Feeling so alone. We walk around, Veiled. Unaware of the suffering. Afraid to let it in. Afraid to feel the pain. Sometimes, I wish I had never peeked.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/13/2010 1:02:00 PM
Very intense and dramatic lines Erica... a deeply intricate piece of Free Verse .. enjoyed with luv.. appreciate your special warm comments today on my poetry ..
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