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Unattainable

A repost of “Unattainable” with special thanks, sincere recognition and due veneration to our fellow poet and friend, Pashang Salehi, for his constructive critique.. valuable remarks.. precious time devoted to my humble work to let it meet the form of Ghazal. *** Meeting passion founts, elation unattainable Loving beyond reach, possession unattainable. Carved pains from which to heal, an abiding endeavour As mind pleasure, satisfaction unattainable. Passion and reason in soul, harmony far to reach Refining a soul, perfection unattainable. Boundless words poetry, a wonder to uncover Soaring fancy, destination unattainable. Beauty, insight of the mind, rainbows of perception Like truth core, the heart distinction unattainable. Love, ever Life in motion, the soul rebirth and growth Winning love chambers, dimensions unattainable. Nature speaks to the silent heart and feeds restful souls Walking Nature’s path, direction unattainable. In the temple of Light, one Besma raises a sight Abiding in blessedness, detection unattainable.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/15/2019 5:43:00 PM

These are not so easy to write but you have done a good job. Very deep thought put to pen. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 4/16/2019 4:09:00 PM

My honour and pleasure, dear Sara.. thank you so much for reading and appreciating my humble poetry.. I highly value your presence on my page.. best regards and blessings.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/18/2018 2:25:00 PM

Light, love and beauty linger within your heart Besma. You are blessed indeed, to be surrounded by so many amazing friends. So kind and thoughtful of Pashang to caress these words with you. My best to you. Always! :) Brandy

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/18/2018 5:15:00 PM

I never cease to count my blessings.. a grace and beauty from God.. indeed, I am blessed to have such beautiful souls on the path of my heart adding beauty and meaning to my life.. I am blessed too, Brandy, to have you as a fellow poetess and dear friend.. thank you so much for your gracious presence and adorable comment! My pleasure and honour. Best regards.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/13/2018 10:33:00 PM

What a pleasure to read this!!! :)

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/14/2018 8:10:00 AM

My great pleasure to read your kind and lovely feedback.. Your visit is so much appreciated Arthur.. thank you so much. Best regards.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/12/2018 9:07:00 AM

"Unattainable" is a beautiful poem, Besma, and I can assure you that you have already attained more than you sought to obtain! You are too modest! Keep your pen busy, my friend. Warm regards // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/12/2018 9:23:00 AM

Indeed, thanks to all my fellow poets on PS including you Paul, who never cease to read, encourage and appreciate my humble work.. that I am thriving and always striving to attain higher levels of beauty. I can't thank you enough.. I highly value your presence and your uplifting and heartfelt feedback. My deepest regards. Always be blessed.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 12/9/2018 2:00:00 AM

Your poem is excellent and outstanding. You have penned with lovely verses. Love it. Thanks for sharing it.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/12/2018 9:09:00 AM

Thank you so much Ravi, your kind and praising words do honour my humble poem.. My deepest regards. Be blessed always.

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/6/2018 8:52:00 PM

I am not familiar with this poetry form but your poem is a very beautiful creation my dear friend! 'A fav ..

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/12/2018 9:06:00 AM

A poet of a high calibre as you are Robert, if you give it a try You will write the best of Ghazals. Looking forward to reading one of yours.. thank you so much for your honourable presence and rewarding feedback. My deepest regards. Be blessed always.

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/6/2018 7:10:00 PM

Your ardent reader relishes this wonderful opportunity to reread this exquisite gem of poetry, my dearest friend, Besma. This beautiful Ghazal reflects the beauty and depth of your poetic being.. a truly awe-inspiring piece and a fav! Also, special thanks to Pashang for his gentle guidance.. Warmest wishes, love and hugs, my lovely friend and soul sister.. ~Susan

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/12/2018 9:03:00 AM

I'm so grateful to you dear Susan.. you overwhelm me with your generous and encouraging words.. you always reward my humble write and honour it with your poetic, beautiful and profound feedbacks.. thank you so much. My warmest wishes. Stay always blessed. Love and hugs.

Winged Warrior

Date: 12/5/2018 6:12:00 AM

The second time is a charm...lovely verse Besma & Pashang...two poetic souls creating words of art...love & light...^WW^

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/6/2018 10:19:00 AM

All the credit goes to Pashang for the recreation of the charm! I'm so much grateful for your gracious presence and praising comment Winged Warrior. That's an honour and a reward. Be blessed always.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/3/2018 12:03:00 PM

Your poem is outstanding as usual Besma, a work of art, but I enjoy reading your replies to comments, humble and appreciative. You deserve the honour that is showered on you. love and hugs, Jennifer.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/3/2018 3:05:00 PM

how wouldn't I give due veneration to such beautiful souls! You are genuine and generous in your comments and replies too.. no wonder dear soul sister! Warmest wishes, love and hugs.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/3/2018 3:02:00 PM

Dearest Jennifer, what a beauty of heart you have! What a beautiful feedback! What comment would meet the genuineness and generosity of your words! The least I can do is give due respect, recognition, show gratitude to readers who read, appreciate, uplift, elate, honour and reward a work of art.. ardent readers, you are one of them dear Jennifer, give life to humble words, boost growth and lead to aspired higher levels of beauty..

Pashang Salehi

Date: 12/2/2018 10:13:00 PM

My dear Besma, the aroma of a flower is from within, a gardener is just a tool...

Pashang Salehi
Date: 12/3/2018 10:23:00 AM

Always...

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/3/2018 2:05:00 AM

Without an adept gardener, flowers could not grow in Beauty! I'm grateful and blessed.. My deepest regards Pashang, be blessed always.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/2/2018 6:43:00 PM

Beautiful imagery in this; "Beauty, insight of the mind, rainbows of perception Like truth core, the heart distinction unattainable." Clearly this Ghazal is filled with the beauty and emotion of your light. "Nature speaks to the silent heart and feeds restful souls"; so true.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/3/2018 2:00:00 AM

Thank you so much, Kiser! I'm so glad that you appreciated every single word of my humble poem.. always a pleasure to read your genuine feedbacks. Best regards. Be blessed always.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/2/2018 2:48:00 PM

I came back to re-read and to tell you that I'm saving it as my FAVE.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/2/2018 4:09:00 PM

Welcome back dear Vijay.. I highly value your visits and appreciate your feedbacks. Thank you so much for the FAVE. So much elated and humbled. My deepest regards. Stay blessed always.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/2/2018 2:15:00 PM

A deep meaning verse Besma , you write these with ease. Beautifully done. Tom.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/2/2018 3:59:00 PM

I am so much grateful to you Tom for your genuine appreciation.. you reward my humble poem. My deepest regards.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/2/2018 12:29:00 PM

Deep waters of thought that to reach the sea bed of understanding for me seems UNATTAINABLE, dearest Besma!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/2/2018 3:44:00 PM

What a beautiful poetry and comment dear Demetrios! Thank you so much for your honourable presence, you add beauty to my humble write.. my deepest regards.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/2/2018 8:08:00 AM

I love this form (I listen to Ghazals in Hindi all the time..they are so so charming)..you delivered it with perfection. Not easy to write, as they often seek to move the reader with depth and breadth, just as you have done Besma. With harmony and tone..you captured my attention. Well done, Besma. Thanks to Pashang as well for his expertise. You have my vote for POTD. Regards!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/2/2018 11:51:00 AM

A heart filled with the finest and the most charming of poetry! A soul in tune with the wonders of Hindi Poetry! I am deeply grateful to you dear Vijay for your generosity and humility sparing no effort to support and encourage me to raise my poetry to higher levels.. You do honour me by your praising and rewarding feedbacks. Thank you so much. My sincere recognition. Stay blessed always.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/2/2018 6:34:00 AM

How lovely to read your poetry today dear Besma, This is comment Sunday, could you please leave a few extra comments on site today to help raise the community spirit, it would be most appreciated .

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/2/2018 11:26:00 AM

My pleasure Pixie! Thank you so much for stopping by and spilling an uplifting and elating comment.. Best Regards. Be blessed always.

Arturo Michael

Date: 12/2/2018 3:37:00 AM

I was intrigued while reading...something made me smile...don't know why...unattainable...a wonderful write...All the best Besma

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/2/2018 11:21:00 AM

I am so glad my humble poem attained your soul and let you smile! An honour and a pleasure to have you on my page with this wonderful feedback! Thank you so much Arturo My deepest regards.