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Unattainable

Satisfying founts of passions, a celebration remains unattainable Like admiring the unreachable, possession remains unattainable. Carved pains from which to heal, an abiding endeavour As pleasure of the mind its satisfaction remains unattainable. Passion and reason within a soul, harmony far to reach Ever refining a beautiful soul, perfection remains unattainable. Poetry, language of uncontrollable words, a wonder to uncover Soaring imagination, the destination remains unattainable. Beauty, a value of the mind, rainbows of perception Like truth core, the heart distinction remains unattainable. Love, that’s Life in motion, the soul rebirth and growth Occupying all Love chambers, a dimension remains unattainable. Nature speaks to silent hearts and feeds restful souls Walking on Nature’s path, the last station remains unattainable. In the temple of Light, one Besma raises passionate a sight Abiding in blessedness, her plea of emotion remains attainable. September 14th, 2018

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 11/23/2018 2:40:00 PM

Wow, Besma... you did a beautiful Ghazal... congratulations... I liked it a lot.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/25/2018 4:20:00 AM

If this is your first ghazal, you're truly gifted...

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/24/2018 11:49:00 AM

I'm very delighted you liked my humble Ghazal! Such an appreciation and praise coming from you, Pashang, the master of this style of art! I'm really honoured and humbled! I can't thank you enough for your uplifting feedback.. that's my first Ghazal and I wanted you to read it and comment on.. My deepest regards.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 9/28/2018 3:36:00 PM

Such a beautifully written spiritual poem, Besma. You express your thoughts w/poetic grace. This is truly an exceptional poem of enlightenment. I LOVE it very much. It's an instant fave. Also, this is my maiden voyage into your ocean of thoughts and dream. Aurora bright write. May love light your path in life always.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/28/2018 5:33:00 PM

Such a wonderful and rewarding feedback! Only souls of grandeur lend generous and poetic a hand to fellow poets to raise high the voice of poetry! I'm deeply touched, humbled and honoured Freddie.. thank you so much. My deepest regards. Stay blessed always.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/26/2018 4:11:00 PM

I still have to attempt this form, Besma, yet you have tackled it with verve and apparent ease! The subject matter offers much food for thought. Although we strive to reach heights of perfection, there is a limit to our potential...but till our journey comes to an end we keep on trying! In this case you have attained the satisfaction of inspiring us readers with uplifting words. ~ Warm regards & blessings // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/27/2018 5:33:00 AM

You overwhelmed me with your genuine humility Paul! A poet of wealth of beauty and insight can but attain graciously any Form of Poetry! You have the heart of a poet and the ink of a master! Deeply humbled by your generous words.. thank you so much. My warmest regards. Be blessed always.

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/23/2018 9:28:00 PM

My dear Besma, you have produced such an exceptional and deeply meaningful poem that speaks volumes. In our mortal role, immortal aspirations, such as perfect harmony and beauty, are unattainable until our soul enters in His eternal Love and Light. Yet the emotional pursuit of attaining beauty, truth and inspiration is innate to our soulful human nature.. maybe this is why we so strongly strive to rise above our human status quo.. a belief that we can improve our existing state of affairs. The splendor and majesty of your poem delights and captivates your avid reader, my dear and enlightened friend. A poem of superb insight and a beauty to behold. Warmest wishes, love and hugs always.. ~Susan

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/27/2018 5:25:00 AM

Dear Susan, you honoured and rewarded my attempt to attain beauty by your profound and insightful response! You are an ardent reader and a masterful poetess I look up to the elegance and artistic dimensions! Having such a knowledgeable reader, a refined poetess I could but be immensely inspired and enlightened.. I am sincerely grateful to the beautiful souls on PS, and to you dear Susan for your great poetic reads and for your constant and unconditional love and support!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/27/2018 5:25:00 AM

I can but learn from you the beauty of refinement and humility. My warmest wishes. Love and hugs.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/20/2018 6:18:00 PM

I find your work very attainable, as well as, superb. Another wonderful read that flows like hot caramel sauce over ice cream.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/21/2018 12:45:00 PM

Oh, thank you so much for this lovely and unique poetic feedback! So much pleased and humbled. My honour M.L. Kiser. Be blessed always.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/19/2018 8:54:00 AM

Your poem proves that to a talented person like yourself dear, Besma, nothing seems to be unattainable! Absolutely a FAV ! God bless you!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/19/2018 12:12:00 PM

Nice to see you again dear Demetrios! Thank you so much from the depth of my heart for your generosity and encouragement.. deeply humbled by your kind and uplifting words.. It is thanks to souls of grandeur, light and beauty, and you are one of them dear Demetrios, that I try to write a piece of work which could be worthy enough to be read and appreciated. My deepest regards. Stay blessed always.

Silent One

Date: 9/19/2018 5:00:00 AM

A difficult form, but this is one of the best Ghazals I have read.. you did the form so well...

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/19/2018 11:56:00 AM

My humble words won't suffice to weave the deepest of gratitude to you Silent One for honouring and praising my humble work.. I'm so much delighted by your generous and encouraging feedback. Thank you so much. My deepest regards. Stay blessed always.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/17/2018 9:41:00 AM

WOW! This is awesome in every respect..love the tone of every couplet..the beautiful sound of a ghazal. The reach of your poems is always great, Besma..for some of us that reach is unattainable. A FAV.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/17/2018 12:35:00 PM

A humble beautiful soul with a generous heart of a poet.. dear Vijay how kind of you to spill such beautiful, cheering and praising words! I'm so much delighted and deeply humbled and touched.. thank you so much. You honoured my humble write! My deepest regards. Be blessed always.

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/15/2018 11:09:00 AM

Thru Love we can attain almost anything...when things become unattainable, we have shut the doors to love and thus we use force, sometimes deadly, to get what we want...you Besma, my friend have attained the power and glory of poetry 10 fold...be blessed, my poetic sister...A FAV in the realm of the Warrior...love & eternal light...^WW^

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/15/2018 3:07:00 PM

When you are surrounded by poets who are of the highest rank in the realm of poetry.. when you are exposed to the elegance of their words, the depth and breadth of their poetic imagination.. when you are shaked by their profound thoughts.. you can but look up to that level of beauty and try to ascend..

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/15/2018 3:07:00 PM

Thank you so much Winged Warrior for your generous and kind words.. they touched the depths of my heart.. You honoured and rewarded me by your sincere praise. My deepest regards. Stay blessed always.

Eve Roper

Date: 9/14/2018 7:59:00 PM

Besma, Unattainable writing is enjoyable to read a form I need to use.Thank you so much for your condolences.

Eve Roper
Date: 9/17/2018 4:56:00 PM

Thank you so much .. blessings to you hugs eve

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/15/2018 2:23:00 AM

Poetry has a wealth of beauty into forms and we are under temptation! My words were under the spell of Ghazal.. My muse lent me a Poetic hand.. I'm grateful and blessed. Dear Eve once again I would like you to know that I share your pain, I feel your loss and I pray to God to bestow upon you the mercy of acceptance, peace and contentment.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/15/2018 2:23:00 AM

Thank you so much for honouring me with your gracious presence and lovely feedback. Looking forward to reading the ink of your heart. My deepest regards. Be blessed always.

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/14/2018 3:46:00 PM

Unattainable indeed...if ever meant to be attained...but inwardly much is gained...Lovely write Besma...All the best

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/14/2018 4:09:00 PM

I do appreciate your uplifting feedback Arturo. Thank you so much. Delighted and humbled. Best regards. Stay blessed.