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Unadorned

“Unadorned is a heart that’s stripped of its beauty.” - Quote by poet She saw an empty room, A place that had lost its bloom, She walked through a hollow space, It was a gloomy face. The place had lost its beauty, It was a book with no continuity, The silence took her down memory lane, Like a parched ground inundated with rain. Her homeland had been recalcitrant to light, Cloaked by perpetual night, It had become an utter shadow, And a shrivelled meadow. Tears streamed down her eyes, She became cold as ice, Redemption seemed far away, Her homeland was an unyielding clay.

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Date: 4/7/2024 3:14:00 PM
Thompson, congratulations on your win in my contest with this outstanding poem, I like the quote too, hugs
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Date: 4/9/2024 12:35:00 AM
Thank you, Constance. It's an honour.
Date: 3/28/2024 2:11:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest,Thompson - Have a lovely Easter :) - hugs
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Date: 3/29/2024 5:49:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. I'm honoured. Blessings in the Easter.
Date: 3/26/2024 7:18:00 AM
Sad love Thompson. Your quote is perfectly reflected in your poem. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 3/26/2024 10:17:00 PM
Thank you, Alice for stopping by. I'm honoured.

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