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Unaccepted

“It’s not so simple to love someone, Who just doesn’t love you back, But it’s said, That in order to love; You have to love, a love That’ll just tear you apart, Along with Breaking your heart.” “And, I truly don’t understand Why that is-- But, I guess that’s just the way Humans are…” I can hear the angel’s crying, Cause’ every time you speak They fear the fear of you lying. See, you scared away my angel-- Oh, how empty life is now without My umber-- The shadows you left me in They’re breaking down my wonders. Now I can’t stop, but wonder, What made you, So utterly cold hearted? I feel like my chest will explode, But my heart will still pump. Dismantled it’ll stay with a, “thump, thump” “Stop and listen, Carefully you’ll hear the rhythm, Those echoes that skip then repeat”. In silence, just a heartbeat, I’ll wait for them to come, in the light There they’ll be to wake me From this horrible dream, This dream, which breaks me. “No, this nightmare that rapes me”. Those clefts that have injured my heart, Have never even scraped me. If you can’t take me, At least say you’d forgave me, Pray with me. He’ll open the doors, he’ll save me-- These lies you’ve laid upon me-- Quit faking, It’s driving me crazy. “Oh hey look, Its daddy’s little baby, Go ahead Otto, say “hello”, He’ll accept you, Maybe”...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/9/2013 12:10:00 AM
Hi Jerry, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy your wonderful days ahead . Always & Forever! **LINDA**
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Date: 5/25/2013 11:23:00 AM
Jerry, your poem is very enjoyable :-) A nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/21/2013 12:45:00 PM
Very nice poem. Well done.
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Date: 5/17/2013 12:52:00 PM
- Jerry, welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for sharing your well-written poem, I like it - I hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your thoughts and words here with us. - Good luck, looking forward to reading more from you in the future Jerry. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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