Un Chanse Una Life

its only been u, trusth me im so glad that u get to read this.
love, trust, respect, and all u need to survive in this world.
i might of been wrong to people but thats how i have made it in this game
i have done all this for u, all u there was no one thing tht i would say no beucase 
the way i push and showed u opend ur eyes so fast yea i know im sorry but i knew 
tht i wasnt going to make it tht long not the life i was doing.
cheat everything and everyone but at the end you know when the reaper is 
following u beaucse u start to see him looking at his sand clock and u just bring up 
ur chest and head and rule with force becuase all u got is pass the tourch and pass 
away and so.
i love you my daugther even though u know nothing. and ur not named with my last 
name its all for ur all own good n safety im a santiago n ur a hernandez so, now u 
know im the right one that gaved up my life for u to make a change in this world.
bye- bye hailey irene hernandez.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/25/2011 6:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Walayee Whitlock's contest "If I Only Had 1 Day To Live". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Felipe. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/22/2011 9:50:00 PM
Congratulations on winning, Felipe.
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Date: 2/22/2011 9:30:00 AM
Awesome job Felipe good to see your most worthy poem in the winner's circle. Congratulations on your poem's honored 13th place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/18/2011 9:04:00 PM
Very sad. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/18/2011 6:04:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest of walayee, felipe
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:54:00 PM
Congrats Felipe on your winning poem in Lay's contest.. enjoy with luv..
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