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Un-A-Peeling

~ I just picked a grapefruit off an old banana tree It sliced it up like an orange and I couldn’t wait to see A watermelon pattern seemed to be its outer skin My mouth it started watering, I needed to dig in It tasted like a nectarine, a lemon and a lime Perhaps a little tinge of plum to occupy my time A sour cherry texture with a granny apple core Was hoping to find cantaloupe, so I just ate some more I noticed just a hint of pear, some grapes without a seed, I guess it was the perfect fruit and all I’ll ever need But one thing that was missing and it made it all unreal I looked for a banana but there wasn’t one to peel ~

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Date: 11/19/2023 6:20:00 AM
Very delicious and funny fruitty poem, Chris.I really pray youre doing fine. God bless you always! :) D
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Date: 9/27/2023 9:08:00 PM
Really funny, Chris, how do you come up with such fruitful ideas!!:)
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Date: 9/6/2023 12:50:00 PM
Your positive energy is roaming fruitfully through your page.
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Date: 9/2/2023 8:42:00 AM
Soooo fruity! :)
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Date: 8/31/2023 5:49:00 PM
How fruity and fun this is. :) and a much different poem from your romantic ones.
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Date: 8/29/2023 9:17:00 AM
This is a fun, creative poem. I enjoyed it. It is like no other. :)
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Date: 8/25/2023 2:55:00 PM
this is a different type of poem from you, chris, but i very much enjoyed it! a delightful and funny rhyme with a great title, too...
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Date: 8/25/2023 10:06:00 AM
Quite creative and very funny. I love it.
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Chris Green
Date: 8/25/2023 10:08:00 AM
Thanks my friend

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