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Umbrellas

Umbrellas Why do we hide from the tears of a lonely city street beneath the lunacy of a parasol, undulating jelly-fish like, dodging shadows, Coquettishly enticing moths to the flame of our swirling prisms, distracting ourselves with unwanted desires. Flamboyant flirts tempting the sun while denying its warmth, deflecting the rain yet craving its moist kisses. Do we fear the melting of our façade, the softening of our dry lips, the awakening of our love for a lonely city street. John G. Lawless Symbolism: The Umbrella Visual #1 2/22/2014

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Date: 3/7/2014 9:26:00 PM
This truly deserved the win,congrats John.
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Date: 3/7/2014 8:31:00 AM
Congratulations on the win John... Well deserved! :)s Verlena
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Date: 3/7/2014 4:56:00 AM
Nice take on the theme of the poem, congrats on the win, john
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Date: 3/7/2014 2:56:00 AM
- "THE UMBRELLA" Contest (by: Nette Onclaud) for the imagination - Congratulations on your winning poem, John ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/23/2014 7:37:00 AM
Good write, John. You have a very traditional style, in a good way.
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Date: 2/22/2014 6:02:00 AM
Dear John: Very nice read. Leon
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John Lawless
Date: 2/22/2014 9:44:00 AM
Thanks for reading this one. Using the contests as a prompt is quite challenging.

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