Umbrella Inside Out

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    Umbrella,




                                            Rain,
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
November 16, 2009 at 4:02 PM
how cool is that...VERY creative!! Light & Love and I hope you did a concrete one for my contest?
Culverhouse Avatar
November 1, 2009 at 6:30 PM
funny one,
Brown Avatar
November 1, 2009 at 6:17 AM
Refreshed after an extra hour of sleep I feel pretty good today. So I am going to be reading some exceptional poems today. Thank you for sharing yours with us Sara. Love, Carol
Nieves Avatar
October 31, 2009 at 7:03 PM
You so clever and creative! ... Love your illustrative poetry. And, thanx for reading my script and commenting, too.
Chircop Avatar
October 31, 2009 at 4:26 PM
so original.rain wind and then it breaks...:)love your writes,and style my friend--Charma
Hilliker Avatar
October 31, 2009 at 11:19 AM
Very clever, Sara! We've all had it happen.
Freeman Avatar
October 31, 2009 at 10:14 AM
Hilarious, Sara. Lol! I hate it when that happens. Smile! Sincerely Moses
H Avatar
October 31, 2009 at 8:48 AM
Very interesting....I like it! -Brittany
Fraser Avatar
October 31, 2009 at 8:40 AM
Well done Sara, this is a tough form to do >> James
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