Ultramarine Blue Sky: a Personification

I lay prone above the surface of the earth:
a boundless expanse of ultramarine blue, 
gazing at every living and nonliving thing, 
the air so clean and pure.

Where are they? 
cotton pieces that loiter around
like fluffy soft white bunnies
that scurry around
scattering and wandering playfully:
clouds that float with fleecy wings
oh.. I do not see them today! 

It is a beautiful early evening;
As no clouds to obstruct my view, 
from above, I could catch a glimpse of
many a poetic mind: dreamy and forlorn
lying on their back in the grass, here and there
within corners of the earth, 
staring blank at my vast serene blue 
when waves of woes were crashing 
at the rocky edges of their mind -
and into a deep trance, they enter.

To ease their distress, 
I whisper into the ears of the infinite seas, 
to send gentle cool breeze their way
and wake them up from their reverie
with a gentle kiss in their gloomy eyes, 
igniting embers of hope in their dreary mind.

As they open their eyes
and wake up from their trance
with many a fresh thoughts to pen -
their muse gets charged
by the charm of my
ultramarine blue inspiration: I become
their unbounded diary of blue pages, 
as they now sprinkle their inspired ink
on my vast blue expanse with their
bright gleaming perceptive eyes.


Date: 11/14/2021
2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 19 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Mark Toney

"U" Contest, New Poems Only Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
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Empress Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 6:44 AM
Wow this is absolutely stunning dear anitha, how beautiful is the way you describe things is such detail. I really love the bunnies line and how you’ve described fleeting clouds is beyond artistic. Depth of this poem too blew me away .: such exquisite imagery. I love how you’ve done this personification: also “ I whisper into the ears of the infinite seas, to send gentle cool breeze their way and wake them up from their reverie” wow! Just love it! Congrats on bein on winners list
Jayasankar Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 6:10 PM
Thank you so very much dear Ink. You are such a talented poetess and a beautiful soul.. a treasure to our Soup community of poets. This is an old fav poem of mine. Thank you again for your kind words of appreciation on my simple verse. Hugs.. ~ Ani
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December 6, 2023 at 5:57 AM
An epic poem Anitha, one that has been written is great personification.. You have always been a lovely person and friend on Poetry Soup.. Thank you for always supporting me and my simple poems.. Congratulations on having your poem showcased..
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December 6, 2023 at 6:41 AM
Thank you so very much for the contest and your wonderful words of appreciation S1. It was easy to enter this old fav poem of mine. Yours.simple poems??? oh my...It was only by reading your great inspiring verses, I started to scribble something in verses. You were one of the few who supported me so much during my initial days of writing here. Thank you so much dear poetic friend. God bless. ~ Ani
Sands Avatar
November 23, 2022 at 3:59 PM
Beautiful! Well done. Congratulations :)
Jayasankar Avatar
November 24, 2022 at 9:33 AM
Thank you so very much Heidi... Much appreciate... Hugs... ~ Ani
Kauffman Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 10:50 AM
So lovely Ani - a dreamy reverie of personification in delicate shades of blue! Every line flows like it is being carried by streams of air! Congratulations on your win! Blessings of sweeping tranquility to you!
Jayasankar Avatar
November 24, 2022 at 9:32 AM
Thank you so very much dear Sam... Much appreciate... Hugs... ~ Ani
Ashley Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 7:11 PM
Dear Ani, my inspiring friend, magnificence spills from your gifted pen. I adore your personification and admire your amazing imagery. I was swept up and away by the eloquence of your poem's metaphorical beauty. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
Toney Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 9:56 AM
Ani, your personification poetry is enchanting. "Their muse gets charged ~ by the charm of my ~ ultramarine blue inspiration: I become ~ their unbounded diary of blue pages, ~ as they now sprinkle their inspired ink ~ on my vast blue expanse with their ~ bright gleaming perceptive eyes." Wow! Congratulations on your win on Mile 19 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on because Mile 20 has already started.
Koplin Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 7:30 AM
Very nice, congratulations on your top win!
Allison Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 2:05 PM
wow what awesome personification Ani, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Daniel Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 5:41 AM
Excellent personification, Anitha, big congratulations:)
Dietrich Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 3:43 PM
back again just to say hi. I just knew this would win big.
La France Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 1:06 PM
Ani, magnificent poem and congratulations on your First Place win in my "U" Contest, New Poems and your quote is quite beautiful ~ love and serenity _Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 8:25 AM
Congratulations on this wonderful win. An amazing write. Have a blessed day writing away........................
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 6:20 AM
Congratulations, Anitha, on your top win. Wonderful composition - love the form "Personification". Each and every line is oozing with lyrical beauty. Love and hugs ~ Mala
Trifiatis Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 4:59 AM
Amazing composition, dearest Anitha. Blessings.
Jayasankar Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 5:10 AM
So glad to hear from you Demetrios... How are you?. Thank you so much for the visit and comment... Do take care... God bless.. ~ Ani
Lawrence Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 7:01 PM
You are a champion Ani !!! Big hugs and congratulations on your number 1 !! Thrilled for you . Back again . I love it !! Hugs to you my friend , Susan xx
George Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 6:21 PM
This is a lovely composition ! So happy to see that a young poet of your age could do so well. Love the lines................. "as they now sprinkle their inspired ink on my vast blue expanse with their bright gleaming perceptive eyes." Hearty Congratulations !
Roper Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 2:10 PM
Beautiful personification, Anitha, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Hugs Eve
Dietrich Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 1:35 PM
wow, Anitha I am seeing this is a number one poem and it really deserves it .This is stunning and one of the best you have written. a Big FAVE
Pandit Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 12:24 PM
I am happy that you won at the TOP of #1. BIG congrats to you, Ani.
Alex Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 10:23 AM
A very beautiful poem like many other poems of yours. "I become their unbounded diary of blue pages," Beautiful. Congratulations!
Lawrence Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 7:16 AM
A dreamy ride of wonder dear Ani !! I loved every moment of it . The inspiration from your heart is infinite and I love being a part of your artistic and soulful journey. A fav for me ! Xxxx love to you , Susan :)
Pandit Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 12:28 PM
Awesome write, Ani. A wonderful adulation lauding the blue expanse of cloudless skies. Enjoyed the write in your hues of nature--a lovely ride on your words of inspiration. All the best.
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November 13, 2021 at 12:25 PM
THIS POEM IS MAGNIFICENT, IT IS AWESOME, IT IS CREATIVE AND YOU MY DEAR WONDERFUL FRIEND CREATED A GEM - i simply love your vivid imagination and your zest for life. BLESS YOU ALWAYS. Sorry about caps. in between, its been a long day, but loved every moment of it! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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November 13, 2021 at 11:42 AM
Ultra poetic composition, Ani. Best for a win.
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