Ultimate Peace

The wind chimes create another song
Playing around in the spring air
Calming with ultimate peace
Nothing lost, music gained
Softening issues
In a hard world
Listening
Eases
Mind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kingston Avatar
September 6, 2022 at 8:19 PM
A dreamy way to peace, so lovely.
Sands Avatar
September 7, 2022 at 5:12 AM
Thank you. I just realized there was a typo to fix in this older poem. I appreciate your visit to it :)
May Avatar
June 26, 2022 at 11:44 AM
A soothing melody to ease the mind, Wonderful write Heidi...
Sands Avatar
June 26, 2022 at 2:44 PM
Yes. The windchimes are so soothing. I appreciate your comments. Thank you :)
Horsman Avatar
June 26, 2022 at 1:59 AM
It sure does, Heidi, love the visual, there you are, sat on the patio, writing this.
Sands Avatar
June 26, 2022 at 8:05 AM
Thank you Harry. Yes. My wind chimes are at my porch and deck. I hope you have a nice day :)
Kamoonpuri Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 1:02 PM
Nature songs and sounds inspire peaceful vibes and this poem is fab in imagery. Kudos! ^^^^^^^^^^^^>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<~~~~~~~ Plz also read and comment on my newest poem too.
Sands Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 9:01 PM
Thank you very much :)
Gentile Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 6:40 AM
Heidi, I love the lines " softening Issues in a hard world" A perfect way to describe the peace that the chimes can bring!! Happy Saturday xxoo
Sands Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 7:06 AM
Thank you for your positive feedback and support Mike! Happy Saturday xxoo :)
Maverick Avatar
June 24, 2022 at 3:57 PM
A mindful write Heidi, that values that Which is always there, If only we can Pause, and let our senses rest in The wind drawn melodies Sometimes there is music where we Often don't observe, till an awakening Occurs, stay blessed.'
Sands Avatar
June 24, 2022 at 7:01 PM
True. Thank you for your kind feedback Joe :)
DiMino Avatar
June 23, 2022 at 5:17 PM
Music to my ears! I love chimes, Heidi...they can be soothing...and from calmness can come wisdom. Less chatter so God can be heard. Excellent write!
Sands Avatar
June 23, 2022 at 5:21 PM
You are right Joe. I find them to be so soothing. Good for the soul! Thank you for your kind comment :)
Pandit Avatar
June 23, 2022 at 4:24 PM
I hear the chimes of wind calming peace. Well written poem, Heidi.
Sands Avatar
June 23, 2022 at 4:38 PM
I am happy to hear that Vijay. It is very soothing. Thank you, my friend :)
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