Uh Oh - I'm In Trouble Now

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For Contest Sponsored by Joseph May

As I was WALKING and TALKING in the park all ALONE TROUBLE was DOUBLE because I was out LATE Best THOUGHT to REPORT to my wife back at HOME But then, a BRIGHT LIGHT entered my BRAIN How UPSET she would GET if I blew off our DATE Best SOUGHT I OUGHT to get out of the RAIN I HURRIED and SCURRIED to get back home- on a DIME But she LEFT all BEREFT, no more would she WAIT Oh WELL, what the HELL- we'll go another TIME

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Maria Williams

Date: 10/28/2024 7:13:00 AM

I haven't seen you around for a while Charlie and was wondering. Hopefully you didn't get into to trouble which delayed you. lol - all the best in Joseph's contest with your fun write. Hugs Maria

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/27/2024 8:49:00 AM

What a fun write you have here. Love It... "Good Luck" Have a blessed day.............

Valsa George

Date: 10/23/2024 2:33:00 AM

So beautifully written dear Charlie. I haven't got a real understanding of Joseph's contest. I am sure you will be placed high. All the best dear friend.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/13/2024 5:45:00 AM

Great poem for the contest. No doubt you'll get top placement.

Rob Carmack

Date: 10/10/2024 7:35:00 PM

I try to look for the positives in each situation. With this one, at least you got home in time to watch the game.

Tom Woody

Date: 10/7/2024 4:24:00 PM

Ahhh but will she be up for it? Time will tell. Have a great weekend Charles

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/7/2024 2:36:00 PM

Oh no, you didn’t! Great poem!

Michael Tor

Date: 10/7/2024 2:00:00 PM

Lol love this Charley. Wow buddy put a big smile on my face. Just came back last week. Missed all you guys, have a lot of catching up to do. I see Vijay is not posting. Glad to read your poems again you haven't lost your touch. Thanks for writing and sharing my friend, hope all is well with you and family...