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My life has taken me to ugly places, and painful spaces. The map of my journey is full of rotten, never forgotten. Monsters dwell in the corridors of my mind, forever entwined. Hideous creeping to drag me to the past, to deep anguish vast. My life has taken me to ugly places, though I changed faces, still there are traces. _________________________________ November 4, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/Ugly Places Copyright Protected, ID 11-1082-773-004 All Rights Reserved, 2018, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, Half-Eleven sponsor, Nina Parmenter,Judged 11/2018 Third Place

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Date: 12/3/2018 4:20:00 PM
Thank you Wendy, Nina, and Jan for visiting my poem and for those great comments and congratulations, appreciate ~
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Date: 12/3/2018 3:42:00 PM
so glad to see you are in a good place Constance, I found the imagery quite chilling:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 12/3/2018 4:19:00 PM
Hugs !
Date: 12/3/2018 11:12:00 AM
Though poignant, I really appreciated your well composed poem,Dear Heart. Congratulations.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/3/2018 4:17:00 PM
:-)
Date: 11/17/2018 1:03:00 PM
Jack thanks for visiting. I have no idea if I did this right ~
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Date: 11/16/2018 1:27:00 PM
i found this new form pretty tricky - love where you went with this x
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Constance La France
Date: 12/3/2018 4:16:00 PM
xoxo
Date: 11/4/2018 7:45:00 PM
Friends, a dark poem but I am happy and fine NOW, not so much in the past and I still suffer from nightmares from a life that was ~
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