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Tywhoppity Bottoms

written in octaves Tom gathers broken branches and stubs his toes on roots. Tywhoppity’s rich bottom is tidied up each autumn. The ache and pain he stanches to reap September fruits. Tom gathers broken branches and stubs his toes on roots. Re-staking his best grapevines on the hillside on his knees, he rakes up leaves and stubble along with rocks and rubble. The smell of fragrant pond pines makes this old farm boy sneeze. Re-staking his best grapevines on the hillside on his knees. His body takes a beating his mind stays in control. Each year his land gets littered but he is not embittered. It’s nature the man competes against with heart and soul. His body takes a beating his mind stays in control. Crops gathered without delay hand-picked by one-man crew. Bottoms broadcast with clover provides a winter cover Keeping Blackford Creek at bay. This bottom - his world view. Crops gathered without delay hand-picked by one-man crew. June 25, 2019 Brian Strand, YOUR PERSONAL PERFECT POEM PICK contest, 3rd place. Tywhoppity Bottoms isn't some place you can find on Google Maps or Wikipedia. It is a small area of bottomland that surrounds Blackford Creek, which creates part of the county line that divides Daviess and Hancock counties in western Kentucky. According to legend, Tywhoppity was given its name by Union soldiers during the Civil War, who remarked the sound of the creek against the rocks made a ty-whop-it-ty sound. When we bought a home on Tye Ave., many times I referred to our area as Tye-whoppity Bottoms especially when our creek (Blackiston Run) rose and got into our neighbor’s house.

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Date: 7/3/2019 11:00:00 AM
Such a gorgeous poem, Reason. My imagination and heart was swept up in your splendid write. Your poetic form, rhythm and rhymes are exquisite, evocative and emotive. I relished your poet’s note as well. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 7/6/2019 10:57:00 PM
Happy belated birthday, Reason, and I hope you enjoyed the 4th as well :))
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Date: 7/6/2019 10:51:00 PM
thank you so much, Ashley, sorry for the late reply. With my birthday on the 3rd and then the 4th, a holiday; I am finally getting around to reading my replies. I appreciate your very positive reply. Have a great day on your every tomorrow.

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