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Tyrants of the Ruling Sun

Tyrants of the Ruling Sun

Let the universe swallow my slaving soul
As the sorrows surround the sinking shoal
The light lingers before it falls on my face
Edacious echoes engulfed will embrace

Sisyphean stars of sadness will defuse
The barbarians of Babylon will bemuse
Silent screams slumber in nomadic night
As the dogmas of deceit deluge in delight

Wandering waves of woe thru the mist
The blackness bereaves with a feudal fist
Apparitions appease the malefic mind
Idolatrous illusions a cancerous confined

The red moon menstruates the mirthful
A lunatic laughter of the hidden hurtful
Dimensional demons deft in their defend
In impeccant infinity’s imperious amend.




March.24.2018
Alliteration poem
Sponsored by: Silent One

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Eve Roper

April 3, 2018 at 9:58 PM

Congratulations on your win, ^WW^, excellent alliteration. Hugs Eve ~`*

Judith S

April 2, 2018 at 7:24 PM

What a masterpiece WW!! Your use of alliteration has me in awe of your style. I love that you rhymed. For me, it just enhances the amazing flow of your lines. Congratulations on your win!!! Sooooo very well deserved :) ~Judy

Maria Williams

April 2, 2018 at 7:07 PM

Wow, great Alliteration WW, and I see Congratulations are in order on your first placing. Well deserved my dear friend on this stunning write. Great choice of music too and a fave...Maria ;)

John Lawless

April 2, 2018 at 4:31 PM

most ingenious take on the theme WW. Congrats on your placement

Kai Michael Neumann

April 2, 2018 at 4:04 AM

Congratulations on your huge win. I like your poem and can relate to it all too well. Two images strike me in particular: 'the red moon menstruating' and the 'silent dogmas of deceit of deceit deluge in delight. Great poem. Thank you for sharing, Kai

Akkina Downing

April 1, 2018 at 10:20 PM

YES!!! Lol...Congrats my awesome ^WW^ friend on your 1st place! Huge white smile :)

Elaine George

April 1, 2018 at 6:30 PM

simply BEAUTIFUL. MANY CONGRAT'S ON YOUR TOP NOTCH WIN.

Kim Rodrigues

April 1, 2018 at 5:40 PM

Great images! Congrats!

Susan Ashley

April 1, 2018 at 5:32 PM

Returning with congratulations on your excellent win, Winged Warrior, with your masterfully written poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Mick Talbot

April 1, 2018 at 5:00 PM

A well worthy 1st place, well done ^WW^! Congratulations. Mick

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 1, 2018 at 3:30 PM

- The winners are named and it was great to see your poem on the winning list - Congratulations, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner

April 1, 2018 at 2:50 PM

Congratulations old friend on top marks for this brilliant write. Hoping you are well.

Silent One

April 1, 2018 at 2:38 PM

Great take on the contest WW, I liked your alliteration, but also the flow and rhyme to this great poem... Be careful of those unruly tyrants.. Congratulations on your first place

Susan Ashley

March 24, 2018 at 10:20 PM

Winged Warrior, your alliteration is awesome and your rhymes are amazing. Palpable, poignant deep and dark emotions.. a write to linger over and savor the sadness.. Best wishes for a win. ~Susan

Akkina Downing

March 24, 2018 at 4:46 PM

What else there is to say, I'm at a loss of words here... can only say, Simply gorgeous! Yes you can picture Me smiling a fabulous white one my dear friend :) all of the best! Hugs and smiles :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 24, 2018 at 4:08 PM

- A difficult form, W.W. - But you've mastered it in style :) - Good luck in the contest - (I've tried ... but lost the courage ... after reading your :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)