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Tyrants of the Ruling Sun

Tyrants of the Ruling Sun Let the universe swallow my slaving soul As the sorrows surround the sinking shoal The light lingers before it falls on my face Edacious echoes engulfed will embrace Sisyphean stars of sadness will defuse The barbarians of Babylon will bemuse Silent screams slumber in nomadic night As the dogmas of deceit deluge in delight Wandering waves of woe thru the mist The blackness bereaves with a feudal fist Apparitions appease the malefic mind Idolatrous illusions a cancerous confined The red moon menstruates the mirthful A lunatic laughter of the hidden hurtful Dimensional demons deft in their defend In impeccant infinity’s imperious amend. March.24.2018 Alliteration poem Sponsored by: Silent One

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Date: 4/3/2018 9:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, ^WW^, excellent alliteration. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/2/2018 7:24:00 PM
What a masterpiece WW!! Your use of alliteration has me in awe of your style. I love that you rhymed. For me, it just enhances the amazing flow of your lines. Congratulations on your win!!! Sooooo very well deserved :) ~Judy
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Date: 4/2/2018 7:07:00 PM
Wow, great Alliteration WW, and I see Congratulations are in order on your first placing. Well deserved my dear friend on this stunning write. Great choice of music too and a fave...Maria ;)
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Date: 4/2/2018 4:31:00 PM
most ingenious take on the theme WW. Congrats on your placement
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Date: 4/2/2018 4:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your huge win. I like your poem and can relate to it all too well. Two images strike me in particular: 'the red moon menstruating' and the 'silent dogmas of deceit of deceit deluge in delight. Great poem. Thank you for sharing, Kai
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Date: 4/1/2018 10:20:00 PM
YES!!! Lol...Congrats my awesome ^WW^ friend on your 1st place! Huge white smile :)
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Date: 4/1/2018 6:30:00 PM
simply BEAUTIFUL. MANY CONGRAT'S ON YOUR TOP NOTCH WIN.
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Date: 4/1/2018 5:40:00 PM
Great images! Congrats!
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Date: 4/1/2018 5:32:00 PM
Returning with congratulations on your excellent win, Winged Warrior, with your masterfully written poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 4/1/2018 5:00:00 PM
A well worthy 1st place, well done ^WW^! Congratulations. Mick
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Date: 4/1/2018 3:30:00 PM
- The winners are named and it was great to see your poem on the winning list - Congratulations, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/1/2018 2:50:00 PM
Congratulations old friend on top marks for this brilliant write. Hoping you are well.
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Date: 4/1/2018 2:38:00 PM
Great take on the contest WW, I liked your alliteration, but also the flow and rhyme to this great poem... Be careful of those unruly tyrants.. Congratulations on your first place
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Date: 3/24/2018 10:20:00 PM
Winged Warrior, your alliteration is awesome and your rhymes are amazing. Palpable, poignant deep and dark emotions.. a write to linger over and savor the sadness.. Best wishes for a win. ~Susan
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Date: 3/24/2018 4:46:00 PM
What else there is to say, I'm at a loss of words here... can only say, Simply gorgeous! Yes you can picture Me smiling a fabulous white one my dear friend :) all of the best! Hugs and smiles :)
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Date: 3/24/2018 4:08:00 PM
- A difficult form, W.W. - But you've mastered it in style :) - Good luck in the contest - (I've tried ... but lost the courage ... after reading your :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/24/2018 3:31:00 PM
ohh, enjoyed the rhythm of your alliteration, WW... winning wishes... huggs
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Date: 3/24/2018 3:13:00 PM
Alliteration being your specialty..you aced this contest WW..a well written poem under visions of ruling sun.
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