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 a repost from 2012 prompted by Greg's poe. photo

Fathers of that era
did not hug or touch or
intimate their love.
He was the same

Did he love us, we his
kin, his blood-seed. He
did not say, yet I 
believe he did.

He was a provider, for
sure. A taste for beer,
never dissolute and
he smoked as most
working folk, did then.

An adept gardener, his
vegetables supplemented
our meagre rationed diet.
Did he care, he never
said, I’m sure he did.

What made him tick,
deep down, I mean
where only introspectives,
types like me will 
sometimes dig.

It is easy, so easy
to theorise. His
generation, strong
and silent, did not 
discuss such things,

especially with his son,
such things were never
done. Maybe..perhaps
with Mum. Feelings 
were not shared but

held back, within.
A reservoir of emotions
controlled, withheld
until death shatters
the dam.

Is that why I cried
so, the day he died
and still I wonder..
did I cry for me,
or was it for him

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Date: 9/8/2020 8:08:00 AM
We could have the same dad, except for the gardening part. I suspect you were crying for yourself. Perhaps I am projecting. I am moved by this piece. I wrote a piece titled Eddy to try and come to terms with the way I view my father. He passed away at 56 and it wasn’t the worst time of my life, in fact I felt a certain relief.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/8/2020 12:52:00 PM
Thanks for commenting on my piece.
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/8/2020 8:23:00 AM
Yes Richard,it is an era thing,and in my case becoming a committed Christian @48,I became free to be .Yes much regret therein,will check out 'Eddy' what form is it as that will help me find it quicker?lOk found it quicker on google,left comment.Cheers

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