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Two With a Broom

Ah, it smells bad within this room
There are two of us with a broom
There’s innocent me
Grandma strikes a plea
As one fart does make quite a vroom 

Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sands Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 8:50 AM
Keep up with the great humor Russell! Laughing is healing :) Thanks for sharing !
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September 2, 2017 at 8:45 AM
Russell you struck my funny bone with this piece. Are you feeling better? Such a hilarious situation vaudeville at its best.
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September 2, 2017 at 7:37 AM
- :))) ... finally we got a photo of Jan ... ... I've always wondered how she looks :))) - Love your limerick, Russell :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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September 2, 2017 at 7:28 AM
lol Russell its your turn to make me smile and i love the pic:-) hugs jan xx
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September 2, 2017 at 6:19 AM
Smelly laugh--a well written poem!
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