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Ah, it smells bad within this room There are two of us with a broom There’s innocent me Grandma strikes a plea As one fart does make quite a vroom Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/2/2017 8:50:00 AM
Keep up with the great humor Russell! Laughing is healing :) Thanks for sharing !
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Date: 9/2/2017 8:45:00 AM
Russell you struck my funny bone with this piece. Are you feeling better? Such a hilarious situation vaudeville at its best.
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Date: 9/2/2017 7:37:00 AM
- :))) ... finally we got a photo of Jan ... ... I've always wondered how she looks :))) - Love your limerick, Russell :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/2/2017 7:28:00 AM
lol Russell its your turn to make me smile and i love the pic:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/2/2017 6:19:00 AM
Smelly laugh--a well written poem!
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