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Two Tools

the trowel sat next to the door
Waiting to join old familiar friends 
In the worn canvas tool bag
It's shape not quite the same as new
Edges rounded  on skim side
and slightly flattened  on the other
From halving so many common bricks
The hard plastic handle was also worn
From constant spinning 
Gathering shaking down movement
to ensure mortar held in twice smoothed strokes
The hammer lay beside it
rounded blade from constant cutting
Rounded head from broken blocks
with edges straight as factory ends

They lie together in memories
Of absent friends
and working days
Of building

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/9/2009 9:04:00 PM
love this wrie.
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Date: 2/9/2009 8:07:00 AM
Mikki , this is a rather poignant piece , as there are many constriction sites , empty at the moment . Unusual topic , but so well delivered ..... Q. How do you confuse an Irishman on a building site ??? A . Put 2 shovels against the wall , and tell him to take his pick !! ...
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Date: 2/9/2009 6:44:00 AM
Makes me think of a retired construction worker. Very good write.
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