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the trowel sat next to the door Waiting to join old familiar friends In the worn canvas tool bag It's shape not quite the same as new Edges rounded on skim side and slightly flattened on the other From halving so many common bricks The hard plastic handle was also worn From constant spinning Gathering shaking down movement to ensure mortar held in twice smoothed strokes The hammer lay beside it rounded blade from constant cutting Rounded head from broken blocks with edges straight as factory ends They lie together in memories Of absent friends and working days Of building

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/9/2009 9:04:00 PM
love this wrie.
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Date: 2/9/2009 8:07:00 AM
Mikki , this is a rather poignant piece , as there are many constriction sites , empty at the moment . Unusual topic , but so well delivered ..... Q. How do you confuse an Irishman on a building site ??? A . Put 2 shovels against the wall , and tell him to take his pick !! ...
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Date: 2/9/2009 6:44:00 AM
Makes me think of a retired construction worker. Very good write.
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