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Two To Tangle -Dinda Minardi

TWO STRENGTHS (( COLLABORATION )) by~ Dinda Minardi Do you still remember how we played around? Mocking each other over our guys We were princesses in our parents’ lawn Bonded by our laughs and cries When family downtime crawled We hold each other as we’re the older Our maturity has been boiled Ready to serves as a breaker We are one and stronger Always love and respect for you, sister To fight with you, Is all I willingly to do When you give up, I’ll be your whip As you ‘re a jolt if spirit’s asleep by~ Poet Destroyer I could never forget the way we played around. Yes! We played patty cake to showoff in front of boys. We built a white castle than, brother tore it down. You were never afraid to show how much you care, Especially when we played tag, and you never played fair. Now your heart is filled with greater love. Your like an angel that fell from above. Your invisible wings protect me in every fall, When we where small you protected me from nightmares. I secretly enjoyed the way you pushed me around. You held your head up high, and never let me down. Our fights where silly ways of building a better bond. My stubbornness came from trying to be just like you. Now "the strength of me", Comes from "the strength of you." A collaboration with * Dinda Minardi my collaboration contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/4/2016 10:52:00 PM
two to tangle **SKAT**
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Date: 10/27/2011 10:07:00 AM
you give people a chance to collab with you and this is what you get .... great job!!!
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Date: 10/21/2011 10:13:00 AM
Irma, I really like how you complemented this one. I think it's because you have had sisters too!! One of the collaborations I see I missed!
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Date: 9/18/2011 11:40:00 PM
Dear P.D. thanks for the placement on your contest. The poem was based on my real life, and my sister of course. I'm glad you liked it and reminded you of your younger sister. Thank you :)
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Date: 9/14/2011 11:26:00 AM
sweet poem. great ending pd :)
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Date: 9/5/2011 5:42:00 AM
Beautiful writing both!
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Date: 9/3/2011 2:29:00 PM
Smile, *^_^* “I Love This Truthfuls Reflection of Blood Ties That Not Even Hades Itself Could Ever Sever My Dear, Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Very Beautiful LeeAnn! *^_^* Causes Myself to Think of My Own Brothers & How That Although Life Has Seperated Us Amid Different Ways But, At The End of The Days & The End of It All *^_^* We Shall Dance Upon The Streets of Joyfuls Everlasting Gold *^_^* Ow, May This Forever Be Your Stories Told Too &, Beautiful Poem Wrapped In Love!” === My Love, Unto Your Lovely Beauty, Always & Forever, Jasper *
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Date: 8/30/2011 1:55:00 AM
love the feeling of familarity and the bond you bring forth in this collab it is quite tangible.. Hehe I think I know what you have in mind for your next contest.. You might just twist it up too ;-) no rush today I am taking the day off work!!
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Date: 8/30/2011 1:30:00 AM
Good luck in the contest' S.
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Date: 8/28/2011 12:35:00 AM
Yet AGAIN another great fit. Well done. Lee
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Date: 8/27/2011 5:04:00 PM
Dinda is a really cool poet and this write is so simple and fragile with memories .. excellent finish PD my BFF ..good luck in the contest to both.. always intriguing to see how u finish each one of these entries my friend.. super creative talent ...your BFF forever...
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Date: 8/27/2011 4:18:00 PM
This is a great collaboration beteen the to of you. Love the way you bring ut the bond between sisters. Good stuff, God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/27/2011 12:11:00 PM
Aww, P.D.!!! This poem really made my day!!! I love your verse, P.D. Especially the two last lines, so sisterly. Thanks P.D. Take care :)
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Date: 8/27/2011 9:17:00 AM
What a wonderful start to my weekend reading your wonderful poetry. Thank you for sharing your writing Linda & Dinda. Hope you are having a beautiful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/27/2011 7:52:00 AM
p.d. i dont envy you when you start choosing, David
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Date: 8/26/2011 11:45:00 PM
great sister type of collabaration, generate some of sensuation? well did was girly sometimes things, how it was the past surely brings:) tittilation.
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Date: 8/26/2011 11:32:00 PM
soup mail~~~
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Date: 8/26/2011 11:15:00 PM
Dinda Minardi~ thank you very much... this was a tough one.. only cause my sisters are young... thanks for the go to write with you,..p.d.
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Date: 8/26/2011 10:26:00 PM
P.D. I am following all your collaboration and you are a gem of a poet inspiring others, kudos to you,
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