Two Thoughts

There was one - then there were two...
they looked identical,
they sounded the same,
they even laughed the same way.
I saw one - she looked cute,
or was it the other one?
I talked to her - she seemed nice,
or was it the other one?
I asked her out - she said "yes,"
or was it the other one?
I picked her up - she looked stunning,
or was it the other one?
We had a great time laughing, joking,
and enjoying the time together.
I dropped her off at her house -
we kissed "goodnight" for hours,
or was it the other one?
While driving home, I couldn't stop thinking about her,
or was I really thinking about the other one?



For "A Dilemma" contest sponsored by Joe Flach.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
November 23, 2011 at 6:11 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joe Flach's "A Dilemma" contest George. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
November 22, 2011 at 5:47 PM
Congrats George on an excellent win for theser magnificent lines luv..
Gorelick Avatar
November 22, 2011 at 5:23 PM
Now, that would be a dilemma...lol,congrats on your win. BG
Song Avatar
November 22, 2011 at 6:22 AM
Did you go on a date with one of the Wrigley Chewing Gum Girls? ha ha. This is a fun twist to the Dilemma Contest, Joe. You should get a standing ovation for cleverness. Always fun to see a guy's dilemma versus a girls. Gwendolen
Jones Avatar
November 21, 2011 at 6:43 PM
yeah, well, they all look alike. grats, George, i think... ~N
Sweetheart Avatar
November 2, 2011 at 10:04 PM
wow ..excellent George.. a true dilemma in these lines ..good luck in the contest luv..
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2011 at 7:45 PM
Sounds like you were dating twins. Double Trouble!! Way to do the contest.
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