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Two Swans Swimming

Two swans swimming in beautiful bliss -
a pretty picture of spring’s splendor is this.
Wonderful, white birds – like soft snow -
they so gracefully glide serenely slow.
Pale pink blossoms all around -
blooms fallen float on the pleasant pond
that the April sun smiles down upon!

Dec. 20, 2021

Now used for A Strand (1056) Poetry Contest

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Paige Hind

August 20, 2024 at 6:26 PM

Gorgeous writing, a lot of beauty in small words

Christuraj Alex

January 21, 2022 at 10:39 PM

Coming back to read again and congratulate. Congratulations!

Valsa George

January 21, 2022 at 7:50 PM

Such a lovely poem and an equally captivating image .... Congratulations Andrea, the one born to be a winner !

Jan Allison

January 5, 2022 at 4:57 PM

Dropping back with many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

January 4, 2022 at 11:19 PM

I am so happy to see this fave of mine at the top of the winner’s list. Congratulations! New year blessings xxoo

Eve Roper

January 2, 2022 at 7:56 PM

Great alterations, Andrea , congratulations on your win. Happy New Year my dear friend with lots of hugs and love

Laura Leiser

January 1, 2022 at 11:54 AM

This is beautifully written, Andrea! Congrats on your win! :)

Paula Goldsmith

January 1, 2022 at 10:46 AM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write/picture. Have a Blessed Day/New Year...........

Paulette Calasibetta

January 1, 2022 at 9:05 AM

A gorgeous, serene and delightful poem. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Happy New Year! Paulette

Ann Peck

January 1, 2022 at 8:51 AM

Beautifully peaceful poem, Andrea. Congratulations on First Place ~ and Happy New Year :)

Joseph May

January 1, 2022 at 8:50 AM

Beautifully penned Andrea, Congrats on your win, Happy New Year!

Joe Maverick

December 27, 2021 at 1:33 PM

Really beautiful write Andrea, I fiddled about And chose cover photo as the place for my Picture of the cloud I saw in flames (honestly How can cloud vapour burn?) Its wet.. So much for my sop to any atheists..' It's an appearance of the Holy Spirit..' OK.! It adheres to no previous science guidelines.' And has been seen by lots of people..' In other Places.. Notably the appearance in South Carolina as the Bible says I do not leave you as Orphans also I Am the same today yesterday And forever

Joe Maverick

December 27, 2021 at 1:34 PM

This would be in pillar form In the exodus days.'

Delice Arleen Skelly

December 23, 2021 at 3:27 AM

Really enjoyed this contest...Your alliteration is so good. Your up there in the winners' circle...Delice

Susan Ashley

December 21, 2021 at 5:33 PM

Your exquisite imagery glides upon the page as beautifully as the pair of swans on the pond. An elegant piece of serene splendor. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for a merry Christmas, my friend.. ~Susan

Connie Marcum Wong

December 21, 2021 at 1:45 PM

Wow Andrea this is stunning! I am sure and that Joseph will love your entry. You have excelled expectations using this form that also resembles the Ekphrasis form, in this case. I really love this beauty and I am Faving it! I hope you have a most wonderful Christmas and you enjoy celebrating with family and your students too. Blessings xxoo

Andrea Dietrich

December 21, 2021 at 8:38 PM

Thanks so much, Connie