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TWO STRANGERS IN LOVE AGAIN Two strangers learned to fall in love again Amidst long distance tumultuous air It buds, blooming regardless distant strains Healing hearts that before been slaved by vain Standing from despair their constant prayer Two strangers learned to fall in love again Wrap tight to gazes, drawing bigger gains Sweet romance: the crayons to us, new pair It buds, blooming regardless distant strains Liberty rouse chemistry dropping sane Their sparkling eyes mirrors pure love and care Two strangers learned to fall in love again To hugs and holds, seduced minds are life-chained Devoted hearts protect: keeping their stare It buds, blooming regardless distant strains When sincerity of love is sustained, everything in space and time we can share. Two strangers learned to fall in love again It buds, blooming regardless distant strains. ________________________________________________________ 6:47pm , January 31, 2016 Dedicated to my Huge One... :)

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Date: 1/28/2017 7:55:00 AM
Your work with such a difficult form, was effortless in its grace, congratulations...
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Date: 5/16/2016 10:34:00 AM
Salute to your pen and a well done to the mind out of which this sea of wisdom emanated. A definite 7
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Date: 3/1/2016 12:06:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem very much, great rhyme, great emotion. Mike
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Date: 2/18/2016 11:42:00 AM
Beautiful piece Olive, you tell this so very well!
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Date: 2/7/2016 1:56:00 AM
Oh wow this is so beautiful Olive. Penned straight from the heart. i really enjoyed this:-)
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Date: 2/4/2016 1:53:00 PM
A Wow poem Olive. Indeed 'Two strangers learned to fall in love again' and your Huge One is so happy it's you ~~ hugs//James ~xx~ tmf's xx
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Date: 2/2/2016 8:33:00 PM
This is really lovely Olive. I think it is for one of the contests. #7 Soup Mail
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Date: 2/2/2016 2:36:00 PM
Great write Olive. Love conquers all. Have a great day!
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Date: 2/1/2016 11:08:00 AM
ohh, i fill the thrill of this lovely poem, eloi... love makes you quill scintillating lines!..hello to huge one!..huggs
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Date: 2/1/2016 10:40:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one today..Good to know that love can bud for those who thought that love had died..Thanks for the visits to my page..I appreciate you reading and taking time to comment..Sara
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Date: 2/5/2016 9:21:00 AM
Sara thank you so much for this drop by.. :) i like your poetry hence whenever i have time i try to visit you.. :) hugs!
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Date: 2/1/2016 10:41:00 AM
Forgot to say great artist rending of you two..I may have mentioned it before on another page though...Sara
Date: 2/1/2016 8:04:00 AM
- When two hearts sets on fire ......... never extinguish the fire - beautiful, Olive :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/4/2016 11:01:00 PM
The fire should be embers Anne Lise.. =`) thanks much! hugs!~Olive ELoisa =`)
Date: 2/1/2016 6:14:00 AM
Olive, the repetitions work beautifully to keep the poem focused. Well done.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/4/2016 11:00:00 PM
This i think the 4th time i did a villanelle and I hope I sound better than the once i made before.. =`) thanks much! =`)
Date: 1/31/2016 3:56:00 PM
Been there done that, Olive, your poetry speaks for so many, and in a unique way..One awesome poem this is so lovely.
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Date: 2/3/2016 2:54:00 AM
Thanks much that still you find this unique... =`) thanks much Harry.. =`)

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