Two Storms

two storms rode through town last week

one bombastic in oratory: 
   fist-shaking, fiery-eyed, finger-pointing,
   thundering as an Old Testament prophet

one timid of speech:
   a lamb at rest in bucolic pasture,   
   misty, dewy, gentle as the silent 'g' in benign

both storms
   calming frayed nerves of neurotic grasses  
   satisfying deep roots in stoic forests,
   filling rills and rivers that carry life 
      to valleys, plains and deserts

each replenishing a thirsty sea

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Date: 12/8/2023 4:09:00 PM
Love the creative way you approach how truth is imparted in this most excellent poem, John! I always relish reading your latest poetry…like opening a new gift! :)
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John Watt
Date: 12/8/2023 6:55:00 PM
Thank you, dear friend! Very kind of you to think of reading my latest lines as akin to opening a gift. I so appreciate you, and your affirmation always means a lot. God bless you ~ John
Date: 12/7/2023 4:12:00 AM
So great to see you posting.. This is a deep analogy and profound also... you expressed your philosophy really well..
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Date: 12/8/2023 1:55:00 PM
Thank you, SO. It means a lot to me that you would read and comment and acknowledge my lengthy absence. You are right in observing this as a philosophical statement; truth may come to us as an earthquake or as a whisper, but it is still truth, and we humans thirst for it. Hope you enjoy your weekend ~ John
Date: 12/6/2023 9:56:00 PM
Love how you compare the two storms John but each one playing it's part in sustaining life to parched vegetation. Hope your week is going well. Tom
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Date: 12/8/2023 1:56:00 PM
Tom, I'm always grateful for your support and thoughtful notes. I hope you are healing up nicely from your recent surgery. Best wishes ~ John
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