Two Rights May Make a Wrong

Robin Hood felt that he was doing good
Redistributing income as he could --
  But the man in green tights
  Violated the rights --
Of the rich to throw away all that food 


      January 31, 2019
  Entry in "Limerick 3" contest
      Sponsor: Joseph May
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Roper Avatar
February 2, 2019 at 7:37 PM
Perfect Limerick, Gershon, I enjoyed reading :) . Congratulations on your win..Hugs Eve ~`*
Wolf Avatar
February 2, 2019 at 11:22 PM
Much appreciated, Eve! :) gw
Messina Avatar
February 2, 2019 at 6:25 AM
Love the ending on this Gershon. Congrats on your win. CM
Wolf Avatar
February 2, 2019 at 11:21 PM
Thanks, Charlie: As they (don't) say -- It took a beginning to get to the ending! :) gw
Canerdy Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 11:31 PM
CONGRATS, Gershon! Janice
Wolf Avatar
February 2, 2019 at 11:21 PM
Thank you so much, Janice! ~ gw
Krutsinger Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 9:12 PM
Yes, and how awful was that? Probably traumatized the poor rich dears.
Wolf Avatar
February 2, 2019 at 11:20 PM
Certainly -- tsk, tsk -- awash in all their wealth...
Dietrich Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 6:42 PM
Nicely done, Gershon. Congrats in the contest.
Allison Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 2:49 PM
loved the clever punch line GW:-) many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Wolf Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 3:43 PM
Thank you, Jan, and congrats again to you on your win, way up there on the list. (I got dizzy, I had to look up so high there on the mountain from my lowly perch, and yet "Hope is the thing with feathers, perched..." LOL) :) gw
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February 1, 2019 at 2:10 PM
Hi Gershon, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
Wolf Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 3:41 PM
Thank you for all of your support, Alexis. Appreciated. ~ gw
Cunningham Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 12:54 PM
Congrats Gershon. Tom.
Wolf Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 3:41 PM
Merci, Monsieur! ~ Garcon
Devonshire Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 12:27 PM
Just stopping back with congratulations on your win, Gershon. Hope you managed to stay warm this week. It even got cold here, but is warm again now.
Wolf Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 1:19 PM
I was hunkered down at home, thanks... And just think in Japan, this poem would be titled: Two Lights Make a Long! :) gw
Kiser Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 11:20 PM
Oh, I love this one.
Wolf Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 1:20 PM
Thanks, M.L. Appreciated. ~ gw
Cunningham Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 4:09 PM
Haha nice one Gershon, I think we've all gone for Robin. Good luck. Tom.
Wolf Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 1:21 PM
And congrats to you on your winner in the contest, Tom! ~ Gershon
Y. Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 4:04 PM
Hi Gershon, I like what you came up with for the contest. It was well written and clever. Although he was doing good he broke laws to do it. I looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Wolf Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 7:15 PM
Thanks, Alexis. You're right: he broke laws to get his way. Does that remind you of the Democrats and Republicans of today. The ends never do justify the means. Brutus and Cassius found out the hard way in Ancient Rome (when they murdered Caesar). Nothing's changed... Best wishes, Gershon
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January 31, 2019 at 3:53 PM
:) Yes, let's just call it income redistribution. Very clever punch line too, Gershon. Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn
Wolf Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 7:16 PM
Ha, Ha, -- I.C. sanitizes what is actually criminal theft, doesn't it? Airbrushes the crime right out of existence. It's the new American way, I guess... Thanks for the insight and for your support, Carolyn! :) gw
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