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Two Ribbons

Two ribbons following strands of her golden hair fall smoothly from one big perfect bow. As she romps, the ribbons brightly swing to and fro as rosy as our dear sweet daughter’s happy smile. March 27, 2019 For Line Gauthier's Ribbon Poetry Contest

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Date: 4/1/2019 5:03:00 AM
- Congratulations, Andrea - A lovely and sweet poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/31/2019 10:32:00 AM
Cute coupling of playful ribbons with a happy smile. Congrats!
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Date: 3/31/2019 9:18:00 AM
Oh, I love this sweet verse, Andrea, congrats on your win. John
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Date: 3/29/2019 11:39:00 PM
Precious write, Andrea. When I began writing my entry I couldn't get the lyrics, "take the ribbon from hair, lay it soft against your skin" out of my head yet I never thought to write about hair ribbons. Glad the idea came to you, the write is lovely. Love, CayCay
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Date: 3/29/2019 4:43:00 PM
The picture of innocence! Beautiful Andrea.
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Date: 3/29/2019 2:49:00 PM
Sweet words! I like it! I await the Jewish holiday of Passover. Tonight is the Sabbath and I will probably watch services on TV! I had a poem in the NY Times called "Electric Judaism". Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 3/28/2019 7:43:00 AM
Excellent imagery write. Expression beautiful with penned well. Enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 3/28/2019 7:25:00 AM
You painted the scene beautifully, Andrea..two ribbons and a happy smile!
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Date: 3/28/2019 12:45:00 AM
beautiful expression
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Date: 3/27/2019 7:26:00 PM
Nicely done!
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Date: 3/27/2019 6:51:00 PM
Darling idea, good luck in the contest, my friend. The typing of this was NOT easy at all!
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Date: 3/27/2019 6:02:00 PM
i agree with jan, andrea - charming is the first word that came to my mind!
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Date: 3/27/2019 5:55:00 PM
what charming imagery Andrea:-) hugs jan xx
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