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Two Out of This World Friends

The yellow and blue ground, has orange trees that are round. Zip-zip my best sparkle friend, her outfit of diamonds and ruby blend. Walking down the stone road, she would beep out a secret code. My other friend peep-peep, always wants to sleep. The air is pink and thick, it makes many here sick. What a place is this, sour not like a sweet candy kiss. I am hungry what do I eat, now serving purple one eyed feet. How do I get out of this dome, I really just want to go home. With a very loud ringing, I awoke with my radio singing. now I can stop screaming, oh my I was just dreaming. Date Written: 12/1/2020 Word Count # 116

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Date: 12/4/2020 10:10:00 AM
Is there a Dorothy involved in this story, my interpretation says there is, but I could be wrong, after all it was just a dream which became a breath-taking creative poem. Well done Paula, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/6/2020 8:04:00 AM
Thanks for your note. This was just a fun/funny write. So glad you it like. Have a great day with blessings and a hug..................
Date: 12/2/2020 2:46:00 PM
Ooh-la-la! Now this is quite the nightmare, Paula! Got to find you rose-colored sleeping glasses asap! lol. ~ Gershon
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/3/2020 1:43:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Nightmare yes. I need some rose-colored sleeping glasses. Have a great day..................
Date: 12/2/2020 2:42:00 PM
I enjoyed this unusual poem. Are the lines supposed to go off to the side that way? I was still able to put them with the next line they went with. Fun imagery.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/3/2020 1:42:00 PM
Thanks for your note. I do not understand why the words look right when I post it and then later show running off the page. I need to fix many of them. Do you know why????? I just fixed it again. Have a great day..................

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