Two Men Walk Into a Bar

Two men walk into a bar one night Hurt like hell, punched out their lights When they awoke Strange words they spoke Sounded like a couple of ancient trilobites
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Pettit Avatar
April 2, 2021 at 3:23 PM
Who knows how trilobites sounded? They have been extinct since the end of the Permian Period. Nevertheless, your limerick was delightful to read.
Ellison Avatar
April 2, 2021 at 5:51 PM
Many thanks Sir Robert! Cheers!
Hankins Avatar
April 2, 2021 at 8:29 AM
Sounds like they'd been better off staying home on that "night." I always enjoy your limericks, Jack. I reckon you've figured that out by now...I'm a fan!
Hankins Avatar
April 4, 2021 at 9:14 AM
What is your quandry, Jack?
Ellison Avatar
April 2, 2021 at 10:51 AM
Yup! I have figured that out but I'm in a little bit of a quandary though Sir Milton?
Cunningham Avatar
April 2, 2021 at 6:02 AM
I reckon alcohol was the culprit here. Lol
Ellison Avatar
April 2, 2021 at 10:51 AM
Possibly!!!
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