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Two Men Walk Into a Bar

Two men walk into a bar one night Hurt like hell, punched out their lights When they awoke Strange words they spoke Sounded like a couple of ancient trilobites

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Robert Pettit

Date: 4/2/2021 3:23:00 PM

Who knows how trilobites sounded? They have been extinct since the end of the Permian Period. Nevertheless, your limerick was delightful to read.

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/2/2021 5:51:00 PM

Many thanks Sir Robert! Cheers!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/2/2021 8:29:00 AM

Sounds like they'd been better off staying home on that "night." I always enjoy your limericks, Jack. I reckon you've figured that out by now...I'm a fan!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/4/2021 9:14:00 AM

What is your quandry, Jack?

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/2/2021 10:51:00 AM

Yup! I have figured that out but I'm in a little bit of a quandary though Sir Milton?

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/2/2021 6:02:00 AM

I reckon alcohol was the culprit here. Lol

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/2/2021 10:51:00 AM

Possibly!!!