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Eyes like a clear lake, reflections of a dreamland, skylights for two hearts. Walking amidst the cloud tops, the light brightens up their day. Edward J. Ebbs - March 15, 2015 Written for a Contest, TANKA 2

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Dean Marais

Date: 3/31/2015 7:26:00 PM

duuuude. this is phenominal. you have really captured the simplicity of eastern poetry. I have really come to love asian poetry, particularly from the chinese, but the japanese are great too. this poem encapsulates such a short and passing moment with such subtly vivid emotion

Edward Ebbs
Date: 3/31/2015 7:28:00 PM

Thank You so much Dean :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/29/2015 9:56:00 PM

Hello Ed, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA

Paul Callus

Date: 3/24/2015 10:49:00 AM

Tanka or not I still love the beauty of these lines, Ed. It deserves a high rating. Congratulations! // paul

Edward Ebbs
Date: 3/24/2015 7:23:00 PM

Thank You Paul :)

Constance La France

Date: 3/22/2015 4:32:00 PM

Ed. congratulations on your placement in the contest with this pretty poem, it has a very dream feel which I love, so it is a 7 for me and thanks for visiting my poem, in the chilly morn . . .

Edward Ebbs
Date: 3/22/2015 5:40:00 PM

Wings, a meaningful response, thank you :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/22/2015 1:59:00 PM

ED, Congratulations on your awesome TANKA 2 win Always & Forever <3 Luv ~LINDA~

Edward Ebbs
Date: 3/22/2015 5:38:00 PM

Thank You PD :)