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As we walk along the beach on a moonlit night I reach for your hand and grasp it feeling our pulse pounding together I stop and turn toward you gazing into your eyes And what I saw travels deep into my soul Our minds connect together knowing what we wanted My lips gently touch yours our very first kiss Softly and tenderly blending our lips together Produce a wetness like rain from stormy weather My tongue slowly moves inside while caressing your lips tenderly Our bodies start moving like a slow moving raft at sea Slowly as the storm approaches land It feels like I am in a raft lost out at sea But then as the storm moves closer The waves are moving faster toward land Pounding and pounding the ocean seas I can feel the water flowing into the raft Then lightning hits our raft Like an explosion out at sea Then thunder roars out from your mouth Like the sound of a lions roaring would be As the sea slowly calms down The look in your eyes tells this story Of two lost souls lost out at sea That came together in harmony

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Date: 1/19/2019 9:00:00 AM
So beautiful a talent like no other thank You
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Bobby May
Date: 1/19/2019 10:52:00 AM
Thank you Victoria very much my friend!
Date: 1/9/2019 10:16:00 AM
Hello Bobby, wow! I enjoyed this poem so much I reread this poem with the same enjoyment. Have a nice day my friend.
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Bobby May
Date: 1/9/2019 10:23:00 AM
Thank you Darlene, I am glad you enjoyed it, Happy New Year and stay safe!
Date: 12/19/2018 6:31:00 PM
Hey Bobby, I loved the symbolics, metaphors. In your next to last stanza LIGHTING was used. LIGHTNING would works as well.
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Bobby May
Date: 12/19/2018 6:49:00 PM
Thank You Carl very much, have a great holiday and stay safe
Date: 12/18/2018 8:25:00 PM
Such a romantic free verse, Bobby.. Hot , hot, hot.... Penned wonderfully!! Enjoyed it.. Blessings!!
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Bobby May
Date: 12/18/2018 8:29:00 PM
Thank you Robertina WOW! I didn't think it was that good have a great holiday and stay safe!
Date: 12/18/2018 7:00:00 PM
WoW! Bobby, Now that is some write. I found it to be hot, steamy, sensual and very romantic. Your created a beautiful scene , what I saw was amazing. Did I mention hot? You sure know how to write that heart racing type of romance. Well done:-) Alexis
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Bobby May
Date: 12/18/2018 7:05:00 PM
Alexis, I am speechless thank you my friend!
Date: 12/13/2018 5:03:00 AM
- A romantic poem in moonlight, Bobby :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Bobby May
Date: 12/13/2018 6:14:00 AM
Thank you Sunshine, I am trying to regain my romance back it hasn't been easy, have a great holiday and stay safe!