Two Lost Souls

As we walk along the beach on a moonlit night
I reach for your hand and grasp it 
feeling our pulse pounding together 
I stop and turn toward you gazing into your eyes
And what I saw travels deep into my soul

Our minds connect together knowing what we wanted
My lips gently touch yours our very first kiss
Softly and tenderly blending our lips together 
Produce a wetness like rain from stormy weather

My tongue slowly moves inside 
while caressing your lips tenderly
Our bodies start moving like a slow moving raft at sea
Slowly as the storm approaches land

It feels like I am in a raft lost out at sea
But then as the storm moves closer
The waves are moving faster toward land
Pounding and pounding the ocean seas
I can feel the water flowing into the raft

Then lightning hits our raft
Like an explosion out at sea
Then thunder roars out from your mouth
Like the sound of a lions roaring would be

As the sea slowly calms down
The look in your eyes tells this story
Of two lost souls lost out at sea
That came together in harmony
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Addino Avatar
January 19, 2019 at 9:00 AM
So beautiful a talent like no other thank You
May Avatar
January 19, 2019 at 10:52 AM
Thank you Victoria very much my friend!
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January 9, 2019 at 10:16 AM
Hello Bobby, wow! I enjoyed this poem so much I reread this poem with the same enjoyment. Have a nice day my friend.
May Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 10:23 AM
Thank you Darlene, I am glad you enjoyed it, Happy New Year and stay safe!
Palmer Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 6:31 PM
Hey Bobby, I loved the symbolics, metaphors. In your next to last stanza LIGHTING was used. LIGHTNING would works as well.
May Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 6:49 PM
Thank You Carl very much, have a great holiday and stay safe
B. Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 8:25 PM
Such a romantic free verse, Bobby.. Hot , hot, hot.... Penned wonderfully!! Enjoyed it.. Blessings!!
May Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 8:29 PM
Thank you Robertina WOW! I didn't think it was that good have a great holiday and stay safe!
Y. Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 7:00 PM
WoW! Bobby, Now that is some write. I found it to be hot, steamy, sensual and very romantic. Your created a beautiful scene , what I saw was amazing. Did I mention hot? You sure know how to write that heart racing type of romance. Well done:-) Alexis
May Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 7:05 PM
Alexis, I am speechless thank you my friend!
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December 13, 2018 at 5:03 AM
- A romantic poem in moonlight, Bobby :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
December 13, 2018 at 6:14 AM
Thank you Sunshine, I am trying to regain my romance back it hasn't been easy, have a great holiday and stay safe!
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