Two Lonely Hearts

There once was a day where lonely hearts could play
without any pain, blame or suffering

There once was a night, where the love was just so right
nothing to stop them, no one to hold them 
responsible

There once was a hour where with no thoughts in mind
only the feelings of longing inside
to feel that closeness shared so true

Between the man and women subdued
fallen in without a raft
drifting further out to sea
with no protection in sight

They gave into fear of needing someone
of needing a place to be
closed up inside, their bodies were tight
and no longer, hungering

There once was a minute, where lonely hearts could lay
without any commitment, from midnight to day
enveloped indeed, these lonely hearts bleed
for something much more desiring

For this is the second, where lonely hearts think
that life could change so drastically
and everything, from that moment on
their hopes and their dreams, were so far gone

But not out of touch, and not out of reach
for this is the time, for new beginnings.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 2/15/2009 8:14:00 AM
Beautifully written write. Sometimes people need people rather they know it or not, and there is always, always a new beginning...
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Date: 2/15/2009 12:49:00 AM
Smile~A song of hope~written very profoundly and straight from the heart and soul!!! Hello Gifted & Precious Tyesha!!!"~You seem to have a wonderful ability of telling stories with messages and purposes~signs of great writers I would say~the type whom impact possitve change within people and the world!!! Smile~My very favorite writers of all, "By Far!!!"~Hope You Had A Wonderful Valentines Dear Lady~My Love & Warmth To You Always, John!:)~"Beautiful Write!!!"
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Date: 2/14/2009 5:21:00 AM
Ahhh new beginnings. Very beautiful Ty your thoughts,,so written with such love. Loveudo, Laurie
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Date: 2/14/2009 4:12:00 AM
Sweet poem that starts anew..new beginnings is all every heart that has been through despair wants..love this .
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Date: 2/14/2009 2:36:00 AM
loved it!! Tyesha, absolutely true... for new beginnings!! and thank you for all your comments on my poems!! means a lot!! ~ Arany
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