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Two Lonely Hearts

There once was a day where lonely hearts could play without any pain, blame or suffering There once was a night, where the love was just so right nothing to stop them, no one to hold them responsible There once was a hour where with no thoughts in mind only the feelings of longing inside to feel that closeness shared so true Between the man and women subdued fallen in without a raft drifting further out to sea with no protection in sight They gave into fear of needing someone of needing a place to be closed up inside, their bodies were tight and no longer, hungering There once was a minute, where lonely hearts could lay without any commitment, from midnight to day enveloped indeed, these lonely hearts bleed for something much more desiring For this is the second, where lonely hearts think that life could change so drastically and everything, from that moment on their hopes and their dreams, were so far gone But not out of touch, and not out of reach for this is the time, for new beginnings.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/15/2009 8:14:00 AM
Beautifully written write. Sometimes people need people rather they know it or not, and there is always, always a new beginning...
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Date: 2/15/2009 12:49:00 AM
Smile~A song of hope~written very profoundly and straight from the heart and soul!!! Hello Gifted & Precious Tyesha!!!"~You seem to have a wonderful ability of telling stories with messages and purposes~signs of great writers I would say~the type whom impact possitve change within people and the world!!! Smile~My very favorite writers of all, "By Far!!!"~Hope You Had A Wonderful Valentines Dear Lady~My Love & Warmth To You Always, John!:)~"Beautiful Write!!!"
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Date: 2/14/2009 5:21:00 AM
Ahhh new beginnings. Very beautiful Ty your thoughts,,so written with such love. Loveudo, Laurie
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Date: 2/14/2009 4:12:00 AM
Sweet poem that starts anew..new beginnings is all every heart that has been through despair wants..love this .
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Date: 2/14/2009 2:36:00 AM
loved it!! Tyesha, absolutely true... for new beginnings!! and thank you for all your comments on my poems!! means a lot!! ~ Arany
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