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Contest of Rick Parise: Two Line Quote 25 Mar 25

When the lash of despair slowly drains, * Remember...faint voice of hope remains.

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/5/2025 8:55:00 PM

What an image and a great message for all those who are dragging their chins on the ground Bravo, Nette. ~ gw

CayCay Jennings

Date: 4/2/2025 1:59:00 PM

So sweet, uplifting, a tender touch of Disney and Spirit! CayCay

Reya Suri

Date: 3/29/2025 8:01:00 PM

Wow!! what a message in little lines.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/26/2025 6:13:00 AM

Dear Nette, Oh what a powerful verse that even in the darkest moments, hope persists. So haunting and uplifting. Your words offer a beacon of light in times of darkness, and that's truly beautiful. A winner in my book! Spring BLessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/25/2025 1:23:00 PM

Nette, a terrific concise bit of wisdom. We like it when despair gets minimized and euphoria rules....but we'll take hope in the meantime. Cute, instructional for thinking about psychology, and powerful words. Smiles!!

Paul Bell

Date: 3/25/2025 1:07:00 PM

It's hard to get a lot into two lines, but you've managed it.

Tom Woody

Date: 3/25/2025 7:58:00 AM

My life's mantra Nette. Hope, faith, love. For me, it's hope in the promise of things to come by divine intervention - Revelation 21:4

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/25/2025 7:53:00 AM

- Lovely quote, Nette :) - Good luck inthe contest :) - hugs