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Two Lenses

When I was young and had zero dollars to spend
Grandpa's skiff with succulent mangoes I loved to tend
With view of City canal, flowing not far from home
Near thoroughfare with perfect patrons; few not so grown
Not so proud as I, safe with shillings from tropic fruits, sold
Sans chant. I never had to beg, my joy was always two fold.

Times have changed, I wouldn't sell jack; my family knows
Sales has never been my forte; I'll be lackadaisical, and let it show
For I'd rather be a P.R. person, who sniff labels and goods that entice
As deals, but trick the masses with much gook, some unnoticed
But that's not all with sales; folks will look you up and down
As though you're part and parcel of goods they've found.
...

Entry for Sara Kendridk's 'Two Lenses' poetry contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Hicks Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 6:39 PM
A good snippet into your past and where you are now. You seem to be a natural at writing true stories ... with your selling I'm not sure, but not lackadaisical in your writing ... now I'm wondering where you are from with the guava trees and mango stands (two fruit trees I've never seen before).
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 8:04 AM
Thanks Tim. You so encouraging and warm and brilliant with your sharing I see.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 7:38 AM
I see from the comments that this is a winner! Congrats. With or without a contest, this is a good piece of writing.
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 1:38 PM
Thanks Rich. right back to U.
A   Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 4:48 AM
Congratulations on your lovely win. Linda
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 11:00 AM
Thanks dear one.
Kendrick Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 9:12 AM
Thank you for participating in my contest “Two Lenses”..It was an honor to read your entry..Sara
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 5:16 PM
Thanks for selecting it, Sara.
Tagore Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 8:15 AM
Lovely take, Iris. hugs, Bobby
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 10:46 AM
Bobby, dear Bobby. Thanks for visiting. Have a wonderful week.
Gentry Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 5:18 PM
Congratulations on your win! Enjoyed reading this. Well done.
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 7:42 AM
Thank you, Susan; for stopping by with your warmth. Have a wonderful week.
Andresen Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 7:53 AM
- Pleasant memories, Iris - Lovely poem :) - Good luck in contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 8:06 AM
Thanks Anne. we shall c. have a lovely weekend.
Buhain-Baello Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 6:34 PM
A very charming and interesting poem on a trade - selling mangoes. I like the views and observations you presented in these lines and the viviid images they carried.
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 7:11 AM
Aaah, Cynthia, my cousin's namesake; thank you for stopping by with your warmth, let's c where it goes.
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