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When I was young and had zero dollars to spend Grandpa's skiff with succulent mangoes I loved to tend With view of City canal, flowing not far from home Near thoroughfare with perfect patrons; few not so grown Not so proud as I, safe with shillings from tropic fruits, sold Sans chant. I never had to beg, my joy was always two fold. Times have changed, I wouldn't sell jack; my family knows Sales has never been my forte; I'll be lackadaisical, and let it show For I'd rather be a P.R. person, who sniff labels and goods that entice As deals, but trick the masses with much gook, some unnoticed But that's not all with sales; folks will look you up and down As though you're part and parcel of goods they've found. ... Entry for Sara Kendridk's 'Two Lenses' poetry contest

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Date: 3/6/2016 6:39:00 PM
A good snippet into your past and where you are now. You seem to be a natural at writing true stories ... with your selling I'm not sure, but not lackadaisical in your writing ... now I'm wondering where you are from with the guava trees and mango stands (two fruit trees I've never seen before).
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 3/10/2016 8:04:00 AM
Thanks Tim. You so encouraging and warm and brilliant with your sharing I see.
Date: 3/6/2016 7:38:00 AM
I see from the comments that this is a winner! Congrats. With or without a contest, this is a good piece of writing.
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 3/6/2016 1:38:00 PM
Thanks Rich. right back to U.
Date: 3/5/2016 4:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your lovely win. Linda
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 3/5/2016 11:00:00 AM
Thanks dear one.
Date: 2/29/2016 9:12:00 AM
Thank you for participating in my contest “Two Lenses”..It was an honor to read your entry..Sara
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 3/1/2016 5:16:00 PM
Thanks for selecting it, Sara.
Date: 2/28/2016 8:15:00 AM
Lovely take, Iris. hugs, Bobby
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 2/28/2016 10:46:00 AM
Bobby, dear Bobby. Thanks for visiting. Have a wonderful week.
Date: 2/27/2016 5:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Enjoyed reading this. Well done.
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 2/28/2016 7:42:00 AM
Thank you, Susan; for stopping by with your warmth. Have a wonderful week.
Date: 2/27/2016 7:53:00 AM
- Pleasant memories, Iris - Lovely poem :) - Good luck in contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 2/27/2016 8:06:00 AM
Thanks Anne. we shall c. have a lovely weekend.
Date: 2/26/2016 6:34:00 PM
A very charming and interesting poem on a trade - selling mangoes. I like the views and observations you presented in these lines and the viviid images they carried.
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 2/27/2016 7:11:00 AM
Aaah, Cynthia, my cousin's namesake; thank you for stopping by with your warmth, let's c where it goes.

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