Two Lenses

Two Lenses Contest
Sponsor: Sara Kendrick

Christmas was sadly over, then New Years Eve started calling,
    parties at papa Joe's, singing and dancing, the snow was falling
Party hats, confetti and balloons, such a dream come true,
    me sipping on cheap grape juice with my cousin Betty Sue.
Running around in circles to old songs from nineteen sixty five,
    my favorite memory is when my favorite Auntie Ivy would arrive! 
She'd cut my favorite chocolate cake with gramma's heirloom knife                              
    not knowing as an adult that Eve would the worst day of my life.

The day started out fine, but I had a feeling that would change,
    my sister had been depressed and her mood was very strange.
I dropped her off at the mall near by trusting she would come home,
    but since that night my life has changed, I would forever be alone.
Calling her...Calling her...I kept calling her...over and over again,
    at exactly three o'clock, I knew I would never see my best friend.
Days flew..weeks...months...oh how much did I cry and grieve,
    As a child I'd never guessed how much I'd dislike New Years Eve.


Date Written: February 26, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Kendrick Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 9:10 AM
Don't apologize for what you were inspired to write..I could feel the emotion in this one..It is sad to loose a loved one on any occasion in which we usually celebrate..Sara
Scars Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 9:28 AM
Thank you once again Sara, you are very sweet :)-luloo
Kendrick Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 9:07 AM
Thank you for participating in my contest “Two Lenses”..It was an honor to read your entry..Sara
Scars Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 9:27 AM
Thank you Sara very much, I am honored you enjoyed it :)-luloo
Canerdy Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 7:30 PM
Well-written, heart-wrenching. Congrats on your win! Janice
Allison Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 3:28 PM
So so heartbreakingly sad LoLoo congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Tagore Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 8:07 AM
Touched by your words, Luloo. Hugs, Bobby
Scars Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 10:42 AM
Thank you Bobby...:)-luloo
Callus Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 3:27 AM
This is sad, Laura. No New Year's eve will ever be the same again. ~ Congratulations on yet another win:) Regards // paul
Scars Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 10:42 AM
Thank you Paul :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 5:33 PM
So very sad, Laura Loo, but wonderfully written in a way that really touched my heart. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 10:41 AM
Thank you Sandra :)-luloo
Gentry Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 5:12 PM
Congratulations on your win with this heartbreaking rhyme! Well done.
Scars Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 10:41 AM
Thank you Susan :)-luloo
B. Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 4:16 PM
This really pulls at the heart strings so very sad. Terribly sorry for the loss of your sister.
Scars Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 10:40 AM
Thank you Carol :)-luloo
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 7:48 PM
wow, Laura, yours is a somber one and very well crafted. I think it is one of the best I have seen. So sorry for your loss. i have four sisters and this is a call I will never have to make or receive.
Scars Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 1:24 PM
Thank you and be grateful for every second with your sisters. There is nothing like a relationship with our sisters... :)-luloo
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace