Rohaan Suresh Poet Free verse

Two Lenses

Running
While soaring in the sky
and breathing below water
Standing
While climbing mountains
and exploring lands

Running 
While sky gets harder to reach
and water gets treacherous 
Standing 
While brooding of mountain tasks
and perilous new lands. 

© Rohaan

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Ggg Bbb March 5, 2016 at 11:35 AM Congratulations! beautiful, like others also. Kamaal kar diya! ;) Ggg Bbb March 5, 2016 at 1:40 PM stranger, but now friend... you too, Rohaan.. expression of a poet-;) Rohaan Suresh March 5, 2016 at 11:55 AM Thankyou so much stranger-but-now-friend!!

Poet Destroyer A March 5, 2016 at 4:49 AM Congratulations on your awesome win... Linda Rohaan Suresh March 5, 2016 at 11:23 AM Thank You so much Linda!

Sara Kendrick February 29, 2016 at 9:05 AM Thank you for participating in my contest “Two Lenses”..It was an honor to read your entry..Sara..This one is unique in style and composition..I enjoyed reading it.. Rohaan Suresh March 1, 2016 at 8:24 AM Ma'am it is my honor. I am happy you liked it. Next time I will make sure you love it...

Anindya Mohan Tagore February 28, 2016 at 8:01 AM and perilous new land ... wonderful. Hugs, Bobby Rohaan Suresh February 28, 2016 at 10:15 AM Thanks. Hugs back. I am happy you liked it.

Susan Gentry February 27, 2016 at 5:04 PM Congratulations on your win! Enjoyed reading. Rohaan Suresh February 27, 2016 at 10:27 PM Thankyou so much.

Andrea Dietrich February 25, 2016 at 9:00 PM yes, definitely two different lenses on this one, Rohaan. Good luck in this fun challenge. Rohaan Suresh February 26, 2016 at 5:53 AM Thanks a lot Andrea.

Poet Destroyer A February 25, 2016 at 2:21 PM Rohaan, well done on the free verse poem. I think the reflection above and under are great. This is an excellent poem. Keep posting. LINDA Rohaan Suresh February 26, 2016 at 5:53 AM Thank You so much Linda..