Two In One

Insanity
Trapped behind the mind
SHOULD I FEEL UNWANTED? 


   ~*~
11-02-15

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Jesse Zerlaut

December 15, 2018 at 10:22 AM

We're all a bit insane, and probably all feel a bit unwanted. Nice poem, skat. ;)

Tim Smith

December 13, 2018 at 7:16 PM

Have a happy holiday Skat

Mahtab Bangalee

December 13, 2018 at 2:11 AM

maybe

Scott Thirtyseven

October 6, 2016 at 8:54 AM

Nice. I hope you don't carry out your threat of a rewrite (or have you already?). For this version is a treat.

Dalia Shahein

January 4, 2016 at 8:17 PM

Beautiful words....Enjoyed it hugs / / :) dalia

Skat A

May 27, 2015 at 8:10 PM

.This post needs major adjustment, will edit soon. Skat...

David Waldrop

February 9, 2015 at 12:12 PM

I was looking at the list of your poems and I saw Happy Birthday I did enjoy it a lot. I just sang Happy birthday to my Grandma about 45 minutes ago. I will read and comment more of your poems very soon.

Poet Destroyer A

July 7, 2013 at 12:26 AM

yes! :-)

Sue Mason

May 20, 2010 at 8:23 PM

I love Happy Birthdays ... smile ... haven't been introduced to you yet (there are entirely toooooo many folks in the Soup !!) but I've seen your name and wanted to say Welcome to PoetrySoup and when is your birthday? I'll add you to my Birthday blogs, Irma !!

Billy Thekidster

April 19, 2010 at 6:23 AM

Childbirth. Never a joke (even when born on April first) Always a miracle. Great Dedication S.K.A.T. Best Wishes Always, Wild Bill (theKidster)

Sue Mason

April 13, 2010 at 1:59 PM

Wonderful tribute to your nephews, Irma. Hope you are having sunny days !!

Phil Boy

April 10, 2010 at 12:53 PM

a happiii one to them . stay cool.

Audrey Castaneda

April 9, 2010 at 8:01 PM

that sure was a good one. dedicated 2 dj & dustin. loved it.... by belinda :)

Doris Culverhouse

April 9, 2010 at 7:27 PM

check out my poem flight's comments, that is where I got the WWW poem.

Audrey Castaneda

April 8, 2010 at 8:17 AM

i thought i was ur favorite jk ..... :) - Audrey Castaneda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 6, 2010 at 7:19 PM

Just to say Hi tonight ..just be on Soup for a little bit and off to beach tomorrow .. I was there today too..so catching up... saw the tag poem from Nathan... cool ..my BBF..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Rachel W

April 5, 2010 at 3:22 PM

Very witty and fun, Irma!

Lynette Chachere

April 4, 2010 at 8:25 PM

lol.April 1st. thats kind of cute in a way.and definetely funny thanks.. -Always&Forever Lynette

Royal Trevino

April 4, 2010 at 8:29 AM

it's a REAL special way to tell them happy birthday mom... well i'm glad i got in contact with D.J. and Dustin through myspace, hopefully we go and visit them.. anyways i'm gonna ask D.J. to look for this site and read this poem love you(^.^)

Faleshia Murphy

April 4, 2010 at 8:20 AM

how sweet of you this was nice thank you for your comments and have a happy easter faleshia

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 4, 2010 at 8:04 AM

Especially sweet tributes to all special ones in your lovely poem..am sending my own personal "happy birthdays" to them too.. enjoy your Easter Day and luv to all of u .. hope u will enter my contest too.. luv and thanxxx for your always welcome and lovely comments on my poetry.. luv.. Linda-Marie ..one BBF to another BBF in luv and friendship and poetry of course..

Gert W. Knop

April 4, 2010 at 4:54 AM

Hi Irma, Enjoyed your poem! I am also born in April as many of my friends too. Thanky you for your kind comments!...Have a great tiume and keep writing!...Gert