Two In One

Insanity
Trapped behind the mind
SHOULD I FEEL UNWANTED? 


   ~*~
11-02-15

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Jesse Zerlaut

Date: 12/15/2018 10:22:00 AM

We're all a bit insane, and probably all feel a bit unwanted. Nice poem, skat. ;)

Tim Smith

Date: 12/13/2018 7:16:00 PM

Have a happy holiday Skat

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 12/13/2018 2:11:00 AM

maybe

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 10/6/2016 8:54:00 AM

Nice. I hope you don't carry out your threat of a rewrite (or have you already?). For this version is a treat.

Dalia Shahein

Date: 1/4/2016 8:17:00 PM

Beautiful words....Enjoyed it hugs / / :) dalia

Skat A

Date: 5/27/2015 8:10:00 PM

.This post needs major adjustment, will edit soon. Skat...

David Waldrop

Date: 2/9/2015 12:12:00 PM

I was looking at the list of your poems and I saw Happy Birthday I did enjoy it a lot. I just sang Happy birthday to my Grandma about 45 minutes ago. I will read and comment more of your poems very soon.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2013 12:26:00 AM

yes! :-)

Sue Mason

Date: 5/20/2010 8:23:00 PM

I love Happy Birthdays ... smile ... haven't been introduced to you yet (there are entirely toooooo many folks in the Soup !!) but I've seen your name and wanted to say Welcome to PoetrySoup and when is your birthday? I'll add you to my Birthday blogs, Irma !!

Billy Thekidster

Date: 4/19/2010 6:23:00 AM

Childbirth. Never a joke (even when born on April first) Always a miracle. Great Dedication S.K.A.T. Best Wishes Always, Wild Bill (theKidster)

Sue Mason

Date: 4/13/2010 1:59:00 PM

Wonderful tribute to your nephews, Irma. Hope you are having sunny days !!

Phil Boy

Date: 4/10/2010 12:53:00 PM

a happiii one to them . stay cool.

Audrey Castaneda

Date: 4/9/2010 8:01:00 PM

that sure was a good one. dedicated 2 dj & dustin. loved it.... by belinda :)

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/9/2010 7:27:00 PM

check out my poem flight's comments, that is where I got the WWW poem.

Audrey Castaneda

Date: 4/8/2010 8:17:00 AM

i thought i was ur favorite jk ..... :) - Audrey Castaneda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/6/2010 7:19:00 PM

Just to say Hi tonight ..just be on Soup for a little bit and off to beach tomorrow .. I was there today too..so catching up... saw the tag poem from Nathan... cool ..my BBF..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Rachel W

Date: 4/5/2010 3:22:00 PM

Very witty and fun, Irma!

Lynette Chachere

Date: 4/4/2010 8:25:00 PM

lol.April 1st. thats kind of cute in a way.and definetely funny thanks.. -Always&Forever Lynette

Royal Trevino

Date: 4/4/2010 8:29:00 AM

it's a REAL special way to tell them happy birthday mom... well i'm glad i got in contact with D.J. and Dustin through myspace, hopefully we go and visit them.. anyways i'm gonna ask D.J. to look for this site and read this poem love you(^.^)

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 4/4/2010 8:20:00 AM

how sweet of you this was nice thank you for your comments and have a happy easter faleshia

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/4/2010 8:04:00 AM

Especially sweet tributes to all special ones in your lovely poem..am sending my own personal "happy birthdays" to them too.. enjoy your Easter Day and luv to all of u .. hope u will enter my contest too.. luv and thanxxx for your always welcome and lovely comments on my poetry.. luv.. Linda-Marie ..one BBF to another BBF in luv and friendship and poetry of course..

Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/4/2010 4:54:00 AM

Hi Irma, Enjoyed your poem! I am also born in April as many of my friends too. Thanky you for your kind comments!...Have a great tiume and keep writing!...Gert

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/3/2010 10:27:00 PM

What a fun day to be born. What a joke to your sis. Nice! P.D. WAS HERE