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Two hours, fourteen minutes

She enjoyed the joy of motherhood once; for nine months: Two hours, fourteen minutes. she held him his entire life and tried to give this tiny, unformed soul all the love that he would need as he moved on. And all the hurts they would endure together, he and she; falls from trees, bruises, scratches, cuts, broken bones, broken hearts, failures, confusion, anger. She felt them all at once and it was unbearable the pain, her grief.

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Date: 5/17/2025 2:42:00 AM
Terry, you summed up in one exquisite poem, just what God made all Mothers for. Through my tears I whole heartedly congratulate you. Best wishes from Wen.
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Date: 5/15/2025 11:02:00 AM
Wow, so poignant and beautiful! We can start out well, mean well, but life happens. Congrats!
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Terry Miller
Date: 5/16/2025 1:48:00 AM
Thank you Kim
Date: 5/15/2025 9:58:00 AM
Great, tragic poem Terry, grieving a life that couldn't be.
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Terry Miller
Date: 5/16/2025 1:48:00 AM
Thank you David
Date: 4/27/2025 6:32:00 PM
Sweet Jesus. What a piece. I felt the pain of this poem in my soul. What a wonderful piece. Thank you!
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/29/2025 7:55:00 AM
I felt this as I wrote it, and sometimes, after finishing a poem, you wonder if you should share it, thank you so much for your kind comment
Date: 4/27/2025 12:40:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful yet sad write. What an ending. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a wonderful spring day.........
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/29/2025 7:56:00 AM
Thank you Paula it is indeed a sad write

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