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Two Hearts

Two Hearts Two hearts set forth upon the road one day Braving the perilous plights of life's path And by cleaving together onward, they Transcended and eclipsed the laws of math For what good is a wing without its pair? Alone it weeps and never hopes to fly But when met with another, both can dare And blaze uncharted trails across the sky So, too, the heart is meant for something more Enclosed within, yet still designed for flight Together two can make the spirit soar And set the tinderbox of love alight As the flames fly, it cannot be undone When it comes to love, one and one makes one.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/8/2015 9:05:00 AM
This is true commitment. Congratulations, Andrew!
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Date: 8/7/2015 1:09:00 AM
Lovely romantic sonnet here Andrew! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/6/2015 8:00:00 PM
Andrew. Congratulations on your awesome win ----------SKAT
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Date: 7/22/2014 1:29:00 AM
Hi, I enjoyed your poem. My favorite lines we the last 4. I like two making the spirit soar and lighting the tinder box! And of course, the love math one and one makes one. Will look forward to more poems. Alofa from Samoa. Jackie
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Date: 7/21/2014 10:59:00 AM
"For what good is a wing without its pair?" I like that. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 6/28/2014 6:59:00 AM
How lovely. Really enjoyed your words Andrew. 'The tinderbox of love' beautiful!
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