Two Hearts

Two Hearts

Two hearts set forth upon the road one day
Braving the perilous plights of life's path
And by cleaving together onward, they
Transcended and eclipsed the laws of math
For what good is a wing without its pair?
Alone it weeps and never hopes to fly
But when met with another, both can dare
And blaze uncharted trails across the sky
So, too, the heart is meant for something more
Enclosed within, yet still designed for flight
Together two can make the spirit soar
And set the tinderbox of love alight
As the flames fly, it cannot be undone
When it comes to love, one and one makes one.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/8/2015 9:05:00 AM
This is true commitment. Congratulations, Andrew!
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Date: 8/7/2015 1:09:00 AM
Lovely romantic sonnet here Andrew! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/6/2015 8:00:00 PM
Andrew. Congratulations on your awesome win ----------SKAT
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Date: 7/22/2014 1:29:00 AM
Hi, I enjoyed your poem. My favorite lines we the last 4. I like two making the spirit soar and lighting the tinder box! And of course, the love math one and one makes one. Will look forward to more poems. Alofa from Samoa. Jackie
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Date: 7/21/2014 10:59:00 AM
"For what good is a wing without its pair?" I like that. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 6/28/2014 6:59:00 AM
How lovely. Really enjoyed your words Andrew. 'The tinderbox of love' beautiful!
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