Pat Adams Poet Limerick

Two Hats Lost

Two hats lost in a desert felt so much dread
For unable to walk, they had to hop instead
Soon with a ragged rim
One hat cried, "It looks dim!"
The other said, "Wait, and I'll go on ahead!"

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Richard Lamoureux September 6, 2019 at 7:18 AM Ha ha, head over heals is the way to go. Pat Adams September 6, 2019 at 5:16 PM That's what I always say sometimes!!!....80)

Lindsay Laurie September 2, 2019 at 10:20 PM G'day Pat … dare I say it, but you've done it again - well done Pat - Lindsay Pat Adams September 3, 2019 at 7:16 AM Thanks a lot Lindsay!..........80)

Arturo Michael September 1, 2019 at 3:41 AM Nice one Pat...great idea... Pat Adams September 1, 2019 at 12:18 PM Thanks Arturo!!......80)

Hello There August 30, 2019 at 3:06 PM I love the picture! But I adore your wit! I mean, really now, all I can do is shake my head and grin. Pat Adams August 30, 2019 at 3:31 PM Your comments turn my legs to Jello, but for now, I'll say good bye hello!........(Thanks!).....pat

David Mchattie August 29, 2019 at 5:03 PM I would be interested to know what came first. The picture or the poem. Have a great day my friend. Pat Adams August 30, 2019 at 7:15 AM The poem. I couldn't find a picture with 2 hats, so I guess this is after the first 1 left?!.........80)

Jan Allison August 29, 2019 at 4:46 PM fabulous word play you made me lol Pat:-) hugs Jan xx Pat Adams August 30, 2019 at 7:14 AM Thanks Jan!..............80)