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The week of my mom’s funeral. My 41st Anniversary today. STILL cold day in April still — mom’s ashes in urn 4/19/2021 IN THE DARK big busy green’ry solicites my solitude — mourning in the dark 4/19/2021

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Date: 4/28/2021 10:03:00 PM
Happy Anniversary! Glad you mentioned this. This is a terrific milestone! Nice haikus also.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2021 4:27:00 AM
Thank you, dear friend! :)
Date: 4/22/2021 5:17:00 PM
Very moving and descriptive of grief and the need for solitude, Kim. Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/22/2021 6:03:00 PM
Thank you, Janice!
Date: 4/21/2021 6:52:00 AM
My deepest condolences to you, Kim...a bittersweet time
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/22/2021 6:03:00 PM
Today was the funeral. Hard day.
Date: 4/20/2021 2:47:00 PM
Cool poem -JT
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/20/2021 5:08:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 4/20/2021 2:20:00 PM
The pain never goes away... Fitting tribute
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/20/2021 5:08:00 PM
A hard one and especially for my dear dad :(
Date: 4/20/2021 10:07:00 AM
My condolences dearest, Kim, the pain lingers. Excellent Haikus! Blessings
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/20/2021 10:36:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 4/20/2021 8:04:00 AM
What should have been a great celebration has become a time of great sadness for you. Again my condolences to you Kim. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/20/2021 10:36:00 AM
Thank you, Tom.
Date: 4/20/2021 5:25:00 AM
My thoughts reach out to you Kim. Wishing you peace and comfort as time heals.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/20/2021 10:36:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay!
Date: 4/19/2021 11:08:00 PM
I wish I could put in some spark of future happiness in you, but it is too early. I know from personal experience. Still time will heal. Great hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/20/2021 3:50:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 4/19/2021 8:21:00 PM
'Still' truly freezes time forever. Superb poesy, Kim. Tears of Comfort, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/19/2021 9:14:00 PM
Thank you, my friend.
Date: 4/19/2021 7:41:00 PM
My heart goes out to you, dear Kim. May God comfort you and yours. hugs, Evelyn
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/19/2021 8:19:00 PM
Thank you. Obviously what I’m thinking about. Never understood until now. <3 sweet Evelyn

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