Two Equals One---Diminished Hexaverse

Angels by our side
Boldly we will fly
Through the tides of change
Dodging circumstance
Our journey's begun

The truth is there 
For us to feel
Don't be afraid
I'll break your fall

Eye to eye
Soul to soul
We are one

Cling tight
To me

Love





for John Heck's contest
"12-IN-1--Choose Your Forte!"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Devonshire Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 10:33 AM
If you have angels by your side, you have nothing to fear from change. The angels will always "break your fall." Excellent entry for John's contest and I wish you success, Deb! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
February 16, 2011 at 5:54 AM
Nice forming of Diminished hexaverse for the contest, Good luck, deb
Pettit Avatar
February 16, 2011 at 4:09 AM
Nice example of a diminished hexaverse. Worded very well.
Onclaud Avatar
February 16, 2011 at 4:00 AM
a soulful work so gently expressed! winning wishes to you, deb.. did a cinquain just now for the contest..:) huggs, nette
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